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you filthy, disgusting whore
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Lol, is that sarcasm? Surely you've heard of watersports.
Even if they're not fun.
Even before touching the questionable content, I have to ask.. why?
Rainbow is a pegasus. She can pretty much 'go' anywhere and let gravity take care of it. She can even wipe with a cloud!
Yellow snow is just one of the costs of having micromanaged weather.
4382822 Looks like you missed the joke there, lol
4383095 It's a fetish fic, that's why.
4382394 Hey now! It's not as bad as sex in the missionary position for the purposes of procreation!
Loved it :D
Not one of the better stories I've read
sorry for the dislike, but you have me curious. Will and/or are the stories for Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell?
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Might I ask what it was that you didn't like about the story? Was it the way it was written, the grammar, or just the subject matter itself.
I will definitely think about it, but at this time I have too many other stories to work on. If I have a chance, then sure.
4382822 of course I've heard of watersports
I myself enjoy jet skiing now and then
4383275 don't try to lessen what you did
Just because stealing a candy bar is worse than murdering your way through an orphanage doesn't mean stealing isn't a crime
4383943 It was just the way the characters were portrayed. Though it is possible too write a character with a different personality and still have it be believable, the written dialog in this one seemed a bit flat though the concept of the story was their, it was how it was pieced together that didn't work for me. Maybe a good practice for the future would be to ask if it is possible to write a section in a different way and still have the final results be reached, but other than that I would love to find out how the other two cmc's received their cutey marks.
You will have a like due to how well it was written....
.... nothing more, I lost sleep over the content of this abomination. 
I quite enjoyed this story. It really is a shame that there aren't more like it.
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Reading back through the story, you're right about the dialogue. I just need more practice writing it. Really that's what I need overall is practice. To be honest, this is only the third finished fanfic I've done. I'm more used to the RP format.
That's hot!
Although I would've preffered if Rainbow Dash was a bit less OOC. You know, caring about Scoot-a-loo a tiny bit more, acting more light-heartedly... And more of Scootaloo's thoughts would be nice, because transition from loving your idol to serving as a toilet isn't a trivial one.
I hope to see stories of AB and SB.
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you may be right, if the jokes was specfic
I think it's because he focused on drinking rather then scat, urine or watersports. Which I find displeasing I wondered if he was being humourous
Bam. Over the sky it went way over my head
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:P okay. Have fun 'jet skiing' whatever that is, doesn't fit my fetish. I think
I hope
4385402 I know how you feel, for I am in the same situation. I have only done three stories, but since I receive little to no feedback (more so the latter), I find it quite difficult to help better myself. However I digress. So good luck bettering yourself and with those stories, while I'm looking forward for more stories.
For those that have already read the story, I've done some revisions to take into account some advice I've received on writing stories. So hopefully it's done a bit better.
What does Sweetie Belle's cutie mark mean?
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Awesomeness doubled!
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Cum bucket?
Awsome fic.
Absolutely fantastic!
you should really write some more like this, there aren't enough mlp "human toilet" stories (even of they're not human 
) keep up the good work! Have a mustache 
4438784 that is not A moustache that is three moustaches
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4688133 I might have deserved that
My jimmies. They are hard.
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4848544 your comment has
Ruffled my jimmies
4855031 I will put my Jimmies dick inside your Jimmies anus.
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If I wasn't gay I'd punch you in the face
4858736 I smell a possible roleplay possibility? Hmm?
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4382394 I was so offended when I saw that.
You need new paragraphs for dialog. Too messy for me to read, sorry. Not voting one way or the other since I didn't finish it.
Enjoyed the scat, vomit kinda ruined it for me. Still, thumbs up!
I have now read scat for the first time. I award you one point, in the form of an upvote, but I will not be putting this on my favorites list and will do my best to forget this experience.
This story...gah, doesn't matter anyway. Its just interesting, yet disgusting and yet intreging all in the same time. lol Good story Bro~!
Rancid as that was, the AN gets you a Like and a Fav
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And here we have the legendary Regidar taking the best, most succinct comment ever written for a spin
"Slimy yet satisfying", was that a Disneys the lion king reference?
Dunno why I always come back to this. Probably because I know that fillies are the best toilets. :3
........................................................................................................ Oh.......................................... My................................................... fucking.........................................Celestia.....................
"Rainbow Dash grunted with each push, only to let out small sighs of relief after each apple slid free. Some times there were a few farts mixed in as well. It doesn't take her long to finish, though, having had more to drink during the day than eat."
Tenses, people. Even in scat porn you need to use them properly to write a good story.
"sensative"
And spelling.
I feel dirty for liking that. ~_~
*Sighs* What has this fandom done to me? *reaches for tissues*
what the fuck did I just read?!?!?!
after reading this, I went to throw up for 20 minutes, and then spent 40 minutes in the shower.
NO JOKE! :
who would write this?!?!
*Before reading* I wonder if I'll get a new fetish?
*After reading* I'm just gonna go over there... And wipe my memory...