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May the floss be with you.

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That description. :rainbowlaugh:

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I never put in real descriptions until I finish!

4847002 .....*giggles* :rainbowlaugh:

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I also write out of order...

4847025 Hmm...But I like what you write! :twilightsmile:

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I think I might skip on the editting and let the drunkness stay as it is

4847073 Oh...ok...:fluttershysad: * Streches from seat and goes to the restroom*

Comment posted by Normal deleted Aug 14th, 2014
Comment posted by Vic Viper deleted Aug 14th, 2014

Knock, knock.
"Spike!" Twilight Sparkle hollered, voice cracking down the middle like a freshly curb stomped head.

:rainbowderp:
Oh, boy. I can tell I'm in for a treat. :pinkiesmile:

When Spike got back he was going to experience the spanking of his lifetime.

I would totally trade places with Spike.

"Sir!" The true source of Twilight's tail swishing arose now as Twilight's anger boiled over, "I must ask you to leave this adobe!

Aww. But I like Adobe. It lets me read .pdf files.

"No, no, no! A thousand times no! Your princess is in another castle!

Cockteasing killjoy...

9001/10 Would read again.

honestly expect more coming from you, but not bad for being drunk.

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Some abodes are adobes. (not this one though)
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/adobe

I had a dream that I checked on this in the middle of the night and it had fifty-eight upvotes and three downvotes. It is cool to see that being half correct.

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But you can't get 29/1.5. :pinkiegasp:

I noticed a few mistakes here and there, but really, I doubt I'd have done so well if I wrote while drunk (which I do sometimes, but I edit while sober).

Fun stuff, though. :twilightsmile:

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I was right about the amount of downvotes though.

I think spanking Spike is a bit out there. She seems more like the lecturing type, but I found this highly amusing.

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I'm going to edit the the story later and I believe that's one of the things I a going to change.

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if you use google docs, I'd be willing to do some editing this weekend

Now all we need is a porn soundtrack with a heavy bass guitar slapping away… :facehoof:

"No, no, no! A thousand times no! Your princess is in another castle!"

Yeah, I bet that canceled the plans of two mustachioed, Italian tradesmen…

Reminds me of this:

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I still have a long way to go but I changed the version up there to be a slightly edited version. My thanks to the mysterious goat sucker.

4851114 ...Its perfect...*hides under blankets*

4851114 what I meant was I expected something a little more sexy or something along the lines of fluffershy.

4851260 might want to think twice before you meh me there missy ;) :P

4851286 you its less fun when its so obvious your playing hard to get ;)

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Too bad. I don't care.

Comment posted by ponyartist deleted Aug 14th, 2014

4851317 Drunken writing is still good writing, Normal.

4882053 who are Charles Bukowski?:derpytongue2:

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This has been edited since then. When I uploaded it while drunk it was only one thousand eight words long.

4882195 True. But you had the idea, and cleaned it up. Makes it awesome. :3

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