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Bada bum bum bummmm im lovin it o3o
4810504 Well thank you!
4810508 your welcome
Yes! New chapter! And now we are moving towards the best part of these series, the third episode, and seeing how things change. Or at least, that is what I am looking forward to most.
That, and Princess Luna, and seeing how that is worked out.
4811055 hahaha. Chapter 3 is the rest of episode 2 and the fallout. Then comes 2 interludes one about life in canterlot from Luna's point of view. And the other showing were the current series of character profiles has come from. Gosh I'm good at making way too much work for myself haha
Awesome chapter. I didn't expect Nightmare to try to bribe Rainbow in that way and the romance between Rarity and Dusk was unexpected yet nicely done. Overall, I enjoying seeing your interpretation of the second episode of the series.
4811244 thanks for me feedback!
So, I gather that the next post will be an interlude or two for chapter 2? I'm just curious, what episodes do you plan on skipping?
In any case, I liked how these trails were written. I see that the rest of the Mane Six have feelings for Dusk, yet Rarity is the only that Dusk knows loves him and he loves her in return. Unless, I misreading things (would not be the first time and won't be the last). I see you still have trouble with capitalizing names. Don't worry, you'll get better with that.
4815770 great to hear from you again! I broke down my ideas for season 1 Here. I am currently working on chapter 3 with interlude 2 / 3 to follow afterwards. I know, I am making a txt file of things to find replace as assistance for my editing but some of the names are still missing. Thanks again for the intrest! And I cant wait to hear the rest of your thoughts on my ideas for the season's events.
4815843 The reason I thought the next chapter was an interlude was because of this:
This left me with the impression that each chapter would represent an episode and if you skip an episode #, you were going to skip that chapter's # as well. If not, could you clarify this for me. please?
4815959 oh wow yah I totally understand that confusion. I split episode 1 / 2 into three chapters and a interlude because it was so big and unwieldy. My rule of hand is if events of a chapter take place inside real events of an episode, were as interludes are things that habben between events of the show. At one point I considered eps 1/2 to be all in one but with the story ballooning so swiftly out of control I cut the story into two separate parts and stuck my totally fanon addition to the story as an interlude between them.
Sadly as I started work anew on chapter 2 it quickly also started to balllon to massive levels as well. I had been considering making the evens with dusk inside nightmare moons shadow realm an interlude but it shouldn't / doesnt appear to be getting as unwieldy as the other chapters so im sticking with my current plan to make it a single chapter.
Your point is a good one though so to avoid confusion I will try my best to make that clear in my author notes on what comes next.
Thanks for helping me clear this up and I hope this rambling has made any sense at all, haha. Boy I ramble on!
And then suddenly it got really hard to follow.
Dang! I thought Dusk Shine X Fluttershy would be the OTP!
This is, in the original S1E02, one of the most awesome things Applejack ever does, not only in terms of courage and athleticism, but also in the degree of caring she shows for somepony she has after all met only within the last twenty-four hours. Here's the Nightmares Are Tragic take on Nightmare Moon's reaction to this:
The opening was rather jarring. I'd gotten so used to the slow pacing of the first few chapters carefully exploring every detail that the sudden scene skip felt really awkward. Frankly it was hard to keep track with all the bouncing around. Then again, that probably would have been a good way to open the episode. Aside from that, I'm finding these stories very pleasant and strangely soothing to read.