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I got to say I enjoy seeing AJ and Pinkie flirting with Dusk. I'm actually surprised that Pinkie distracted Barb that way. Good chapter. I forgot to add a question. How did Pinkie know that the satín in Dusk's pants was AJ's juices?
Very nice! The heat for a mare must really be a embarassing moment.
But what's up with Celestia and her demands?! It's just Trollestia or there is a real purpose other than put Dusk in hot water?
Good job here, psi. Though there are a lot of awkward moments in there for dusk. Especially the Shower and the talk with both Pinkie and AJ. Well, keep up the good work.
4856383 she licked the damn spot. Don't ask how Pinkie knows what AJ tastes like. Its Pinkie.
4856427 thanks! Its mostly but she is also testing the strength of his leadership, aka the real meaning behind the element of friendship/magic.
4856460 Thanks. I liked the shower scene a lot.
4856549 Any reason to mess with ten is too good to pass up, huh?
Ah well, can't wait to see more Though I fear for how Fluttershy will act when he starts to ask questions. Though what is with Barb though, I am just curious on that.
WHY.....IS THIS SO INTOXICATINGLY GOOD?!
Good work with the story, but "your" should be replaced with "you're" a few times in it.
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4858560 thanks. I will try to hunt them all down and replace the mistakes!
4858560 oh wow. I think I used your instead of you're or you are like 14 times in this section. Wow o.o;;; And thanks. I found one cause I used your instead of you and one cause i used hope instead of help. So much for my editing skills when i've been up for 20 hours! haha >.>;;
4858636 Shivering Isles Error 202.7: 1a. Madgod has lost even his insanity. 1b. Madgod has SOMEHOW become sane. 1c. Madgod has declared 'Fishstick Ultamatricism' and therefore has blown everyones mind into madness. If not a previous problem, please check section Two.
2a. Madgod has become a sexy donut eating pegasus. 2b. Madgod has become a talking rock with chronic arthritis. 2c. Madgod has become a overly dramatic teenage girl. 2d. Madgod got AIDS. 2e. Madgod has become the walking stick of a thirty-year-old virgin turned warlock who has an extreme addiction to very sweet tea, as well as a tentacle fetish. 2f. Madgod has become a geek who is wasting his existence on something called IMVU. 2g. Madgod has become delishous crab meat and is devoured by the grim reaper who is currently smoking weed to escape his lack of girlfriend and extreme depression. 2h. Madgod has finally become a fishstick, enough said. 2i. Madgod has become a sex slave for Clavicus Vile. 2j. Madgod ate Draco Malfoy and has turned into a pig with a snakes tongue. 2k. Madgod has become addicted to Meth. 2l. Madgod killed Kenny, the bloody bastrd. 2m. Madgod has evolved into Magikarp *bada da daaaa*. 2n. Madgod has become Peter Griffin and has Louis tied up in his basement. 2o. Madgod has killed off the last true Snow Elves because "Why not?". 2p. Madgod has burned his face onto Equestria. 2q. Madgod has met up with Discord and Loki. 2r. Madgod has been kidnapped by Molestia. 2s. Madgod has been kidnapped by Gamer Luna. 2t. Madgod has been kidnapped by Molestia and Gamer Luna. 2u. Madgod has been abducted by aliens and has been anally probed. 2v. Madgod is now the star of a Reality TV show called: Life of Madgod. 2w. Madgod has become a black guy. 2x. Madgod is cursing old people out in ancient and entirely forgotten languages. 2y. Madgod has become a pornographer. 2z. Madgod has become a drunken clam set on making all women wear mini-skirts. If not one of these please check part Three.
3a. Madgod has become addicted to this story. 3b. Madgod is very hyper. 3c. Combinarion of 3a and 3b. If not one of these, then you are an idiot who has SERIOUSLY screwed some sh!t up. I mean really?! How did you get this error if its not 3a, 3b, or 3c?! God! I mean really! I...I'm done...just done....ERROR 202.7 is out!
4858734 ... Get some help man
4858743 SHIVERING ISLES ERROR 001 1a. Madgod is Madgod therefore everything is a lie
4858750 as is the cake.
4858753 YES! By the way......did you actually read the entire thing..... <-<
4858757 Yes. Not that it made a fuckload of sense. Of course, I think that was the point, eh?
4858768 *claps* CONGRATS THAT'S THE CORRECT ANSWER! YOU JUST WON..........
ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!!!!!
4858768 i also didn't expect anyone to read anymore after I put in 2d and 2e......
4858773 Your a goof. But that's OK so am I.
4858803 Ok.....i think you need to look up 'goof' and 'in need of psyc ward' because im most definitely not the former...not with my mind at least. <-<
Finding got to read this, and I have to say, favourite chapter so far! I love seeing Dusk interact with the girls, and what sort of misadventure they are getting into.
4859144 hahaha thanks man. I love the reaction people are having so far!
4859156 Well, hey, keep up the good work and you are bound to get lots of good reactions! And I think you have reached the part that suits you best, having fun with characters interacting with each other.
4859179 haha. I agree. The joy of interludes is that I have such freedom to riff at will. I want to keep most eps as close to the show in general as possible.
4858671 S'aright! Happens to the best of us! Was just weird seeing it in an otherwise quite neatly written fic
4859255 haha well thank you very much but I will be the first to admit that I need a prereader or editor horribly. But I think as I have gone on even just in these 20 days that I've improved a lot. Thanks again
I'm guessing that Beatrix Lula is 'The Great and Powerful Trixie'. It seems that Sunset Shimmer was the reason Dusk is very wary about relationships...poor guy. And what were Beatrix's actions around the school?
4859741 Well, Trixie's last name IS Lulamoon...and Trixie CAN be from Beatrix...
I see what psi did there. GG, my friend, GG.
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Haha.
Huh, so Dusk isn't only a book worm and recluse by nature, but a choice brought on by an unpleasant experience. A good touch to add to keep Dusk hesitant about accepting the others' advances.
Wasn't expecting AJ to be so... forward. Most stories depict her as a more reserved traditionalist, but then, maybe she is. Based on Nurse Redheart, Equestria in general is just a lot more open about sex. Or maybe we can just excuse her behavior as part of heat. Although I kinda liked my first idea better. It means Barb might have better luck than Spike ever did.