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eh, don't worry about it. it's not like she tried to do any of those things, so i think she's ok for the moment. i only hope that she learns to forgive herself, otherwise...
s h e ' s g o n n a h a v e a b a d t i m e . . .
trying to live a happy life and stuff, you know?
OK, this chapter was gold. I liked how the fillies interacted with each other and I liked how Dusk Shine gave excellent advice to the fillies, especially Diamond Tiara whom he acknowledges that she needs advice to mature into a great leader, about the symbolism of cutie marks and how a blank flank has limitless potential. Dusk's conversation with Octavia was entertaining, especially because Octavia's characterization was great and her love for Vinyl was very sweet. Rarity giving Bronze dating advice and Dusk showing appreciation towards Bronze was very sweet, especially on the date. It's still sad to see Bronze be plagued with self doubt and trauma. Zecora's interaction with Granny Smith was great, especially since Granny shows her acceptance of Zecora and Big Mac's romance. Likewise, Dusk's interaction with Moonlight Dreamer (I forgot, did she appear on a previous chapter?) was great as she gave him great advice concerning the duties that Celestia assigned to him and encouraged him to talk with his mares about his insecurities and fears from his past with Sunset. I was surprised that Moonlight Dreamer had a romance with Redheart, though her last line in the story made me curious Moonlight Dreamer is Luna in disguise to date Redheart, isn't she? If so, then I wonder how long Redheart has been dating Luna's alter ego.. This chapter is magnificent and I hope the next one comes soon to discover how Bronze would handle her issues and Hoity's reaction to Rarity's dresses.
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She's shown up a few times. She showed up for Winter Wrap Up, she was there after the Parasprite debacle, and I think she was around for the Poison Joke chapter.
I know it's late, but I just needed to say this for Bronze's encounter with Poison Joke, since it traumatized her: You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
6755029 Yes, yes indeed! A very classic line.
Bronze is being really mentally hammered. Going to take some real treatment to help her.
Well, Im out of ideas.
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That was why she stayed in the hospital with Cadance helping her over the winter. Apparently it didn't work as well as everyone thought.
And it was going so well too! Thankfully Mommy Rarity is here to help.
Oh my. Me thinks the title might be going to his head just a little bit.
Sick burn! And it's followed by me having a mysterious desire to punch little kids.
Goddam is Dusk taking charge. Is this going to lead to a subplot where he's getting too big for his britches?
A CMC of four? Hmm. Does this mean Pipsqueak might eventually join as their little herd's stallion? I learned this trick from the movie Inception.
I read this from someone else and I'm inclined to agree. Moonlight does seem like Luna in disguise.
I can honestly say I never expected such a turn with Vinyl.
And now I'm imagining Winona voiced by Ducky from The Land Before Time.
I continue to approve Zec-Mac. However, this does complicate Hearts and Hooves Day... or does is?
Lose the "one". Hah! Caught one.
Needs a period.
and YOU let me know. Also, wouldn't this need a question mark? It's written as more of a suggestion than question, but I'm not sure.
Sounds like Bronze needs a talk for Caboose from RvB. In an excellent crossover http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149514/i-against-i-me-against-you, Caboose explains to Pinkie that he had lingering thoughts about doing horrible things to his friends after being possessed by Omega. However, he eventually realized that the fact these thoughts scared him so much meant that they could never happen.
6754257 Quite right man. Quite right.
6754345 And thank you too! Making the Fillies feel right was important to me, and making Twilight's comments to the CMC fit with this version was a joy, even starting the first stages of DT's cutie mark. Finally introducing Octavia was really enjoyable, so I can't wait to develop her further, most of all her relationship with Vinyl. Bronze/Rarity/Dusk's relationship was a lot of fun to work on. Zecora's interaction with Granny Smith was hell, a bloody nightmare to write. Expect a lot more of Moonlights company in future chapters, she is deeply involved in current events. Expect the last part of this chapter to show how Rarity cares for others, but expect to see a moment of weakness from Rarity as well.
6755347 Bronze is a good girl, she'll get the help she needs, don't worry.
6756442 Momma Rarity loves helping out her girls.
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Just realization just how silly some traditions are. Don't worry, he's still human. And Scootaloo is a real pleasure to write. She's got balls to spare haha.
HAHA. Truth is, I have a lot of plans for the CMC, and they are going to come fast. As for Moonlight? She's got her own story to tell.
Vinyl is a real joy, I can't wait to make better use of her.
Oh god, that goes straight to the heart, that poor kid.
Or does it, indeed.
Good catch on those two, but the third is one my editors have talked over for a while and like as is haha.
Huh. Been ages since I looked into RvB, but I remember liking it decades ago. Don't worry, Bronze will get the help she needs.
6759783 If you have the time, you should check back into RvB. Season 3 was filler, but everything else was awesome.