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I loved it! Maybe Barb is a little to much boy for my taste, why not make her more feminin?
Also, I'm very curious of what you wil do with Tixie. Will she be a one episode girl (like in the show) or will she tag along?
This chapter was great. I enjoyed seeing the lenghts that Ángel was willing to make Fluttershy take to get the ticket and his sarcástico behavior. Additionally, I likes seeing AJ express interest in dating Dusk with Rarity's permission now that Dusk and Rarity are a couple.
4932578 I understand that. But she was raised with two older 'brothers' in dusk and shining as well as night light as twilight velvet was the far busier parrent in my universe. Dont worry Rarity will continue to help fix that over time!
I've been foreshadowing trixie and she will be more than a one shot but it will take time before her return.
4932654 thanks. Shadowthunder helped a lot with angel's persona and words. Expect major aj Development in chapter 5 but that's only after interlude 4 - the princesses of love.
Glad to see thus still going with a nice perspective on the show. Keep up the good work.
4932732 My pleasure. Just started working on interlude 4 all about Cadence's visit to Dusk and Scootaloo but I've got outlines done for chapter 5 Apple Bucking Season; chapter 6 Griffin Brush Off and Chapter 7 Boast Busters.
4932752 Great! I look forward to them!
I have solid internet again! (Yay!) Madgo is once more able to take all you're problems away!
4939452 yayyyyyy!
I have no interest in reading this story. I do have interest in pointing this out:
Since your characters are human/anthro, I need to point this out from Fimfiction FAQ.
This is under there Story Submissions rules, under Don't Post:
That's all I'm going to say on this matter.
4951130 Thanks for your time.
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Something tells me that rule isn't really enforced when there's been foalcon stories in the feature box.
4951790 that's a big part of why I wasn't worried about it until now. Here in Canada its 16 not 18.
4951130 please remember that, even in the USA, there ARE people in REAL life, that are under 18 and having that kind of thing.
Plus before anyone asks, as Psi said, he is Canadian, and the age of concent is 16. Plus he established that pretty well that's how he based the government in this version of Equestria. Heck, there are SEVERAL states in the. US that have that age thing as well. So please, at least think about differing cultures and the like.
4952494 But it's against site rules. So, fucking remember that too.
4951790 But the fact here is that anthro and human fics must have aged up characters above 18. Every foalcon fic gets away because it's literally a pony. So, they could start from any age. We can't judge the ponies. But we can judge anthros and humans.
4952543 how many others may have broken the rule? Sorry if that came out as rude, but pal, it's not gonna be common. Heck, he even said that he added it in as a warning for far longer down the road.
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Yes, in the USA and Canada, that kind of thing happens. It's allowed between other minors, if I recall. I do happen to live here as well, you know.
However, you seem to be forgetting an important detail. Human/anthro underaged porn is against the site rules, and is not allowed, as Dev clearly pointed out. Why? Because the FiMFiction.net servers are hosted in the UK, where that kind of content is against the law. And said law is strictly enforced, by the way. I understand the "cultures" thing perfectly well, but that doesn't change the fact that, as far as this site is concerned at least, it is very, very illegal. And the UK takes this sort of thing quite seriously.
I would suggest reading up on site rules and/or UK law before going around making comments like that. You aren't wrong, no, but this site is no place for that kind of content.
~Blinkie
4952551 So, he's openly planning to break the rules later on in the fic?
4952553 ah, thanks. sorry if I got you upset. I'm just trying to help my pal Psi here. Thanks for explaining that and I can understand that.
And Roaring, I didn't mean that. But this other guy pointed out about the rule a bit better. ;;
4952553 ah, thanks. sorry if I got you upset. I'm just trying to help my pal Psi here. Thanks for explaining that and I can understand that.
And Roaring, I didn't mean that. But this other guy pointed out about the rule a bit better. ;;
4952558 It doesn't matter, you need to read the site rules before you start throwing baseless arguments like other countries into it.
4952566 again, I apologize. I did read the rules, and will keep it in mind. I'm not trying to cause trouble for anyone and I am sorry for upsetting anyone.
4952554 No. I am simply trying to find out the exact level of leeway is in the system. Sorry if there is any confusion or concern.
4952591 There is no leeway. Just scrap the idea.
4953323 I wasn't going to bother replying but I figured I'd let you know there are a lot of solutions besides canceling the plotline and pretending underage sex isn't a thing. The easiest and the one I'm most likely to do is to handle that story arc with a softer hand, keeping things in a less explicit and more 'teen' level of details and description to avoid breaking the sites rules. Thanks for your concern though, its great to see some advice and support.
So...it says there is a new chapter in my feed...i do not see one....MADGOD APPROVES THIS INSANITY
besides, i have yet to preread it
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I got a feeling this whole mess is my bad, dood. I actually didn't know that underage sex of characters was a banned thing, and I kinda gave Psi-Nova advice saying that he should at least put it in the description to warn people ahead of time before diving in, dood.
Sorry Psi-nova for the shitty advice, dood.
4986149 same here...
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You ment well and that's qll that matters. Thanks for caring!
4986138 accidentally hit publish while editing tbe Interlude and it would not remove it just unpublish it. Ugh. Sorry man.
4986819 all is forgiven
Careful, Dusk, your Timmy Tur- er, I mean, your... Phoenix Wright is showing?...
Anyway, thanks for showing us all how awesome Angel Bunny can be after getting humanized.
This little bastard can talk!? Oh fuck the hell yes!!!
Regarding the editing issue, recently I have downloaded a program called 'NaturalReader Free'. As the name implies, the program is free and it reads the text placed in it. I've been using it to power through some of the longer stories and it's actually helped me catch a bunch of little mistakes. Just something to consider.
Your story is great, but you should start structuring your sentences in the past tence, and not use the word would so liberally. It's like your telling us that "this may or may not be the way it happened". Be deffinate in your wording, as this is YOUR story. Past tence not being used correctly is number one on the list of flubs by budding writers. I know your story is already done, but I just can't stay immersed to save my life. But at the same time, I love your story telling, so I feel that I'm missing out on something if I just stop reading.
Kinda jarring with the excessive use of 'would' instead of proper past-tense verbs. Is this a persistent issue in future chapters? Because I'm not certain I can enjoy the story if so. Kept breaking immersion.
So Angel is "human-y" too? I think that's kind-of a step too far.