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So many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes! It is quite an interesting story still, but, ya know!
Strange, strange... i wonder what Rarity has done. I guess she gave money to a bad guy who took advantage of her ( with a name like mascarade why do you expect...).
Also, I wonder. Is Luna in love ( or interested) with Dusk? I'm thinking she is but maybe she just wants him to do some special important tasks.
anyway, keep the good work, i love it!
4845203 Sorry. Trying to improve >. <
4845206 got not gave. But otherwise aye... quiet!
Needs more giant herd. o3o
4845296 it's coming dear friend. Got a 4 day weekend soon so shouldn't be too long for me to finish interlude 3 and get to ticket master.
4845323 Madgod has school....buck my luck....It shall rain burritos to represnt my spicy rage!
4845337 burritos fuel my writing. Good madgod.
4845344 <-< woot! Also I thank you for your help with ch 4. However I give up on old English. *shrugs*I think people prefer Luna NOT sounding like an idiot.
Thank you for making the interlude come quickly, as it makes me happy to receive quick updates even if they're segmented. I admit that you got me intrigued by Rarity's past and curious as to when Luna gave Redheart those panties. Anyhow, this is a great chapter.
If Dusk only knew. Damn, this nurse is hot, in more ways than one. I feel bad for Barb, though. She just wants it to be her 'father' and her, with no complications. Too bad that is not going to happen. I wonder what Rarity has done that worries Celestia? In any case, Dusk and Barb are in for one hell of an emotional and adventurous rollercoaster ride.
4846974 Agreed. But it's easy to empathize with little Barb, until now all other mares wanted to take Dusk as a prize, and while Rarity appears to be the same her reasons are more then skin deep.
Ahh Redheart, you dirty girl. She should have offered to manscape Dusk.
i'm gonna guess and say the Mane Six are likely gonna be the 'Herd'?
And also, is this meant to be an animal thing? I know they're anthropomorphic here, I am just checking
4847649 semi anthro or humanized. Aka flesh and hands but tails horns and wings.
4847711 Ah, OK. Just checking.
4847767 no problem at all! I'm always up for answering questions and clarification on things that people might have questions or confusion about.
After all most of the time it's my fault for the confusion in the first place.
Like I should have said that barb is still a dragon anthro not a humanized dragon haha. Yay
4847833 also, I am now curious...is Barbara a lesbian? I am just checking since she has a crush on Rarity still ;;;
4847860 for now? Confused and impressed young girl! Things may change as she grows up.
4847893 Gotcha, just checking
Though I bet she'd be surprised when the girls show more affection towards Dusk, huh? XP
4849245 It's a growing thing. But don't worry, I've some fun planned with all that.
4849251 Though I am now curious what will happen when Trixie shows up...or Gilda...or the Diamond Dogs...
4849256 Trixie is already being foreshadowed. Gilda is going to be a heavy altered episode. The diamond dogs are currently just going to be a mostly spinoff story for RarityxBarb
4849263 GOtcha. Though I take it you are keeping the Apple Buck season thing? After all, I think Dusk WOULD be really concerned with AJ being more out of it than usual.
4849271 Yah. Check out my blogs. Their is an old one about my general plan for season 1. Its out of date now but it should give you a nice preview.
4849274 Understood :) If you need a hand, I can help
4849277 I'm always open to suggestions / comments of anything!
4849283 OK, I'll message ya with ideas :)
got a broken italics tag near the end there.
Again this is all so strangely relaxing. The sexual scenes elicit the appropriate reactions, including humor, but I'm strangely at ease reading these. Without an immediate threat, I'm much more passive with this compared to other stories. I think it's because this story combines so many elements, how ever small, that I enjoy, but without any that I hate, at least not yet. No sexism or needless violence against the guys, the characters are all fairly sincere with that human realism I mentioned earlier, the harem scenario is presented with the understanding that multiple if not all love interests can win, you give the chapters proper names, and a bunch of other things like how the dragon assistant's feelings are taken into consideration.
Barb's insecurities and the way Dusk consoled her was especially heart warming. They're both rightly concerned about him getting into a relationship, but Barb, so young, wonders why he can't simply stick with the ones she's already taken a liking to. I'm always impressed the way some fans can take these little elements from the show and make them more realistic, natural, appealing, or just overall better. Too many fail, of course, but that just makes the successes all the more inspiring.
Can i get some context to this letter? I dont understand its relevance.