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I love this chapter. It was interesting to see how everybody worked together to help AJ and how you established conflict by making AJ addicted to leaves and Dusk from overwork. I got to say that Girls are very liberal in this chapter. Rarity being willing to share Dusk with AJ and RD, the spa twins having nude art, Mayor Mare being confident of her sexuality, Redheart flirting with Dusk while having a relationship with another mare (Luna), and Luna unknowingly flirting with Silken twice (assuming that the mare watching over Dusk and AJ is a disguised Luna). I admit that I enjoyed your interpretation of the characters, especially how Apple Bloom is more responsible and Luna giving Dusk secret tests of character. This is one of your best chapters yet and I hope to see more soon.
5362438 Thanks Moon, It's great to hear from you so often and It's a pleasure to see you picking up on some of the fun aspects I slipped in to build the world for readers. As long as nothing goes wrong with my brain I should have the last piece of this chapter out tomorrow. If something comes up to stop me, I'll toss out Silken's profile early to make up for it!
One of the few reasons I still log into this site. Well done and keep up the good work.
5363069 Oh gosh! thanks a ton! I hope the rewrites of the older chapters me and Wrabbit have done have helped with the parts that were bugging you before!
Keep up the good work. You certainly have a talent for putting a new twist on old news and then adding a level of realism to it. I certainly look forward to the next posting, as the hints of Gilda seem ominous.
Also...was it Luna and her guards that caused the Apple's labor form to disappear? As part of this 'test?'
5363171 No, the request sheet was left unfinished in the first part when Applejack freaked out at Ginger over the labor shortage before harvest itself. Aka, I'm giving Applejack a few flaws to make up for the fact in the show she is basically the flawless straight man compared to her friends who are all psychotic in some way haha. Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed!
5363071 Nooooo it's finals week, man. Don't give me a reason to reread this now!
20 seconds faster? So, about 20% cooler?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
5363629 Hahahaha. That wasn't even meant to be a 20 % reference haha.
Redheart: “I asked her weeks ago. She made a joke about you liking older mares. Besides, I might still want you as a stallion Dusk, but don’t worry. I’ve found a mare who enjoys keeping my bed warm at night, so don’t feel guilty for saying no.”
Dusk: “Older mares! Ha! Next she will suggest I ask Princess Luna on a date. Just think of the etiquette rules I would have to study just to avoid making a fool out of myself!"
Only one word for this... Irony.
A fine addiction story where the drug was a means to an end. Luna's gradual, yet semi professional attraction towards dusk was also refreshing. And lastly, it looks like Dusk's herd is growing of its own accord, whether he realizes it or not. I'm guessing Look Before You Sleep is gonna be fun.
In the words of Luna
:Luna: " Thou had crafted an excellent chapter here Mr. Mc Awsome & talented Fimfic writer Psi-Nova. "