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Bronze's growing infatuation is increasingly cute. The "Let him know what you want" especially so.
The commentary on bat pony culture and population was fascinatingly utilitarian.
Yes it was, and Celestia should be absolutely merciless in her teasing.
Clingy Fluttershy is adorable Fluttershy.
With how much the rainbow factory is being mentioned, it seems like we're due for a reference to the grim-dark fic.
Dash's thoughts on the bat mare getting the short end, combined with how she sided/will side with the buffalo makes me wonder what it is about loyalty that makes one so inclined to general fairness.
A note from the outline?
This chapter was very interesting. It's nice to see Bronze be more confident around Dusk and give him the smooch he deserved. The aerial competitions were amazing to read and were well written, especially with Gentle, Lightning, and Thrash flying. Gotta say, I'm surprised you made Thrash aka Dumb Bell be a more competent rival to RD than Lightning Dust herself. Hearing about batmares culture given Silken comments about Gentle was interesting and Scootaloo being a trivia master about Wonderbolts history. Anyway, the chapter was amazing as usual. Hope the next part comes soon.
As long as you can stabilise the clouds, dont need much material over them to effectively turn tem into airships that anyone can walk around on. I cant remember what it is for grams per cubic metre lift to give depth for persons weight.
Egos. So many Egos, and not the sort you want either.
7497894 aw fuck.
And thanks. You are exactly right on all of that. It's also foreshadowing Fluttershy’s upcoming chapter. She shall star at last!
Oh, this was priceless! This like alone had me laugh so hard I woke the roomie.
Have a moustache! Have three!
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It's been a long time coming, but rebuilding her confidence was an important arc to deal with.
Thanks! I wanted to establish the long running side characters for future Dash side stories.
Don't worry, all four of the rivals are good at something. Even if it's only becasue Dash hasn't been able to attend Wonderbolts shows.
Something very important to me is world building, so establishing the bat ponys is super important to me.
Yep! With special guests making cameos! Thanks a ton and have a great one!
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Haha. A great thought concept for sure! Kinda like how the spyclouds I introduced back in Dragonshy!
Yeah, but at least Dash can back her ego up. She is Rainbow Fucking Dash after all!
7498355 HA! Thanks. Shawkthorian reedited it at least twice to make it flow better, and I'm glad the final result turned out so funny.
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I have two words: Thank you!
Thanks a ton!~ Establishing my own universe has been a big thing to me, and It's really great to hear from people that I've done that well.
Not in my plans, but it is a huge part of the ongoing story of Dusk. A very interesting idea about corruption and damaged horns though!
Thanks! Feel free to drop any questions you ever have at any time and I will be delighted with getting you an answer anytime you ask!
7505133 Haha. Well I'm glad your having fun so far. Can't wait to hear what you think as you continue!