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Hey, about halfway through the new chapter, it's all centered in the middle.
This chapter was very interesting. I'm surprised that Rarityt was so generous as to convince Dusk to accept a stud fee and impregnate Amethyst. Gotta say, the way Dusk no the others helped Zecora with her hypothermia was sweet and Dusk's date with Pinkie and assisting Dash was sweet. The ending, with Amethyst preparing for Winter-Wrap up was a great way to conclude the chapter. I wonder how Amethyst will interact with Dusk during the event. BTW, during the time skip, did Dusk managed to impregnate Amethyst? Thanks for the chapter. Hope to see Winter Wrap Up soon.
the only thing i gotta point put is, when you have someone you suspect is suffering from frost bite you do not rub their skin to warn them up this can cause more damage as you compress the cells into the ice crystals. the best method is to get a warm wet cloth (NOT HOT) to slowly melt any ice that has formed and not shock the person recovering from freezing.
Is zecora going to be moving into the Library herd for the winters from now on, then back to her own place for better access to the Everfree resources the rest of the year? Will her place need more work, windows etc?
Maybe remaining the assistant to Winter Wrap Up planner will be better as then she can take over otherwise?
6248737 Fixed! The right tags sometimes glitch out. Thanks!
6248863 Thanks! I wrapped up a lot of the little things that had been botherinf me of late here so I can move forward with several subplots. No, Dusk hasn't done anything to Amethyst yet, but expect some surprises next chapter!
6248941 Hey man, thanks. It has been about 15 years since I did my saint John's training so I should have better researched this. I thought that was only for stage two (or whatever the proper terminology is) frostbite. Friction warming for someone whohas no visible signs and is simply cold. Thanks for the correction, I'll patch it in when I get off work.
6249182 Okay, no she isn't part of his herd, just stayed in thenspare room next to Barb's for the winter. Her house defently needs some serious upgrades! As for Amethyst? This is her big year! She's getting promoted from unpayed volunteer to project lead after many years of poor management!
6249673 some mild cases of frostbite only present as redness and pain, due to the newly forming ice crystals, rubbing and pressure only increase the damage.
this was more of a PSA then anything else as this knowledge could one day save a life.
6249742 I understand! Thanks again.
6249742 The more you know is half the battle.
6249778 but wait if knowing is half (50%) the battle and getting there is half (50%) the battle does that mean i already won? cause
50% + 50% = 100%
6249788 I'd think that applying you're knowledge is the other half, so, sorry.
6249800 drat..... wait half the battle from knowledge, half from getting there and half from applying knowledge... Half Life 3 confirmed
6249822 Oh, I just thought that it meant that power levels are bullsh*t.
Really nice.
I suppose it figures that it would take an emergency for Zecora to finally dress practically.
Scootaloo lost her parents? I thought Red Heart took her in because they were neglecting her.
I got a little lost at the talk of foals. It sounded like Derpy and Amethyst made the announcement twice, or did Mrs. Cake also announce the same? Okay, Mrs. Cake did announce, but it was still a little confusing as to who was talking.
Love Rarity's casualness at suggesting her stud do some studding and Dusk's reaction. It's like no one realizes how this arrangement benefits the stallion so much. It makes me hate you just a little for depicting such a wonderful world I can never live in.
Big Mac and... Bronze, or Zecora... who's living with Fluttershy now? Either way, I like that the big guy is getting some. Also, you may want to change it to (gun-shy).
Testing for STDs between herds. Just one more example of the practicality I love so much.
Any thoughts on going back to change the names of Pinkie's sisters now that we know them for real?
6249941
Well, they are, aren't they? Besides, this clearly isn't Dusk's Final Form.