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Thank you for the shi/hir comment in the notes. At first i thought it was a typing error but then you kept using it.
It does read a little odd though if you dont know what it means.
But besides that a nice chapter. And maybe a suggestion: upload bio's and the chapters they are in at the same moment.
It was odd reading those things about Trixie and already knowing the conclusion
5772928 I understand your comment about Bio's and I usualy do wait, thus why Lyra's and a few others are not done yet. Thanks for your suggestion!
I made sure to include the Shi part on purpose for just that reason. I wanted to make sure people understood and didn't start staying anything super offensive! I did a little research with both the trans and futa groups to make sure the phrasing and language was comfortable and in the end, feel comfortable using the term.
Glad to be of assistance. I'm kind of used to the using of shi/hir when I address some of my family. It's actually nice to see proper terms used for something like that.
5772963 I'm just glad that my rusty knowledge of trans terminology wasn't offensively outdated haha
First, I got to say that I'm surprised about Lyra's secret and I enjoyed her interactions with Bon Bon and Dusk. Second, I found your idea for making Aloe and Lotus spa to also function as a gym and a brothel to be brilliant. I wonder how often Rarity used the latter service? I also found Bon Bon's side job with Aloe to be surprising, but she's shown to be a sensible and mature mare. BTW, are Minuette and Lyra former lovers?. Also, I found that tidbit of the stud fee to be a surprising yet interesting concept. Once again, thanks for the amazing chapter.
5772981 No problem, and thanks! I introduced a lot of world building in this part of the chapter since the next part will be a VERY different experience far more in tune to Dusk's attempt to stop Nightmare Moon.
And yes, or at least somewhat, it will become more clear in later chapters! :3
5772997 I really hope the next chapter comes soon. I'm curious to learn more about Fluttershy's past, your interpretation on how she'd deal with the dragon, and possibly how she first met the girls and "befriended" Rarity. I just realized two things. Will the dragon be humanized like Barb? Also, will Philomena be anthrofied like the other pets? The last question is due to my curiosity as to how you will deal with the episode where Fluttershy first meets Philomena. Thanks for the quick reply.
5773164 Haha. Philo will be a special case; Fluttershy's past will come up, don't worry! And the dragon is feral, but we will go into that in the next part as well! Glad you enjoyed and can't wait to give you move!
So wait... is Lyra trans (as in going through the changes) or just futa (as in born with it)? And if futa what level are we talking? Like does she technically have both sets of genitals or does she just have boobs and a dick? For reference obviously.
Or is this all going to be covered in her bio?
5773990 shi is a natural born full trans. More will be revealed in time. Yes shi has both sets of everything. No shi doesn't have a silly 3 foot cock like some people give trans/futa characters Her first profile is going to be lacking a lot of details since Dusk doesn't have that information. It will come out with next chapter as Duzk writes it as an attempt at distracting himself and stress relief. More about Lyra will come kut every few chapters over time. Got plans for hir!
Sorry I haven't been on much ;; been busy
5774876 It's all good!
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Ah much easier to picture now! Thank you for the clarification!
5775337 No problem! I live for questions! Feel free to always ask more! I'm glad the futa/trans character reveal is going over well, it opens up a lot of fun sideplots!
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A: Thanks. It was a huge focus to make sure the reader felt bad for Trixie
B: And just think, if they are being this harsh with testing, what must they be preparing him for??
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Thank Celestia for no three foot Wang ripped straight from a hentai. Thank you so much
Yeah. A D grade student suddenly becoming a master ace like that would warrant suspicion anywhere. Course, when dealing with the unpredictable nature of magic, it makes sense that just about any student even mildly note worthy would have reports like these. However, given the nature of cutie marks, I imagine it's taken as far less suspicious for ponies to suddenly become good at things overnight with no logical build up.
Loving the little gestures between Dusk, Rarity, and Barb. Barb has clearly fallen into the roll of little sister/daughter while Rarity and Dusk are acting ever so slightly like her parents/a married couple, or at least practicing as such.
Futa Lyra, huh. Neat.
(Lyra was shocked at how shi had somehow) Misspelling you make several times.
The "hir" and "Shi" thing is kind of annoying.
I will still use 'her' to describe Lyra, personally. The use of Hir/Shi is too disorienting for me.
That, and Futa isn't my thing. Just personal taste.
Alright, then. Onward to more horse words.
I don't get the shi/hir thing. It just looks like you have typos strewn throughout your chapter.
Welp. That chapter was a slog through tumblresque transtrender cringe. It's a pity. The story had been great up until the need to virtue-signal past the point of tolerance. Hopefully that doesn't turn into a running theme, it's always sad to see something with a lot of potential fall into the "look how right-thinking I am!' circlejerk.
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I agree. It's not because I've got some problem with actual transgendered people, it's just the word replacements feel like speed bumps in the text. Not to mention, the words sound exactly the same and are used in the same context. So there isn't a whole lotta reason to replace the regular pronouns.
Not enough for me to stop reading like 8099080, but will still annoy me at the very least.
Ummm... did you have an 'I' epidemic in this paragraph??? What's with the where spellings?