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Prepare yourselves, as the GREAT and POWERFUL TRRRIXIE astounds you with detailed story lines, ANOTHER different look at her character, and 90% humanized ponies. You're welcome.
5616562 This isn't the Trixie the world the world wants, she is the Trixie the world needed... or something silly and cryptic like that!
Man, this chapter, though short, is very dramatic. I wonder how Dusk none the others will deal with Trixie.
5616610 Don't worry, while this first part of chapter 7 is short, it's just the first wing of the action! Glad you liked it!
Dusk Shine lying on the ground in pain. Yup, another normal day in Ponyville.
Joking aside, something felt off in the flow of the story. I am not really sure why or what, just felt awkward to my eyes.
I am curious as to why it is that Trixie seems so desperate to see Dusk, and why Dusk and the guards seem so afraid of her? Or is it possible there might be a case of mistaken identity? If Trixie knew she was hunted by the guard, would she take the risk of reveling herself with her stage show? Or was the stage show a method of drawing out Dusk, and she didn't care about the risks as long as she could see him?
5617570 exactly! And as for pacing issues, it is set a little rushed in this chapter, but the rushed pace is to help stress how the misunderstanding at the heart of this issue prevents an easier solution.
I am gripping my desk so hard over this. It almost feels like she's being hunted for something she didn't do/can't control. But knowing that she technically is an antagonist makes me doubt that story and yet I still want her to get away unharmed and not being hunted because, best pony. Lol
Gah! More I say!! please?
Wow. Went back and watched this episode and realized that I have been reading fics so long I developed my own voices for the characters that sound nothing like them.
5620548 Until Equestria Girls this is my biggest planed twist on Cannon. I'm glad to hear you are enjoying the conflicting elements of the situation! Hopefully I can keep these elements as powerful in part 2 and beyond.
5620697 haha. I think we all do that sometimes. Just like if I'm stuck on a chapter i put the episode or some fan music on loop and suddenly my brain just kind slides into production mode without me even realizing.
so is this shortening of this chapter gonna be a thing now or just for this instance?
5624906 Just here I believe.
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5625023 It's not the chapter that's being shortened, but the parts. That way I can try to release a part a week rather than a month.
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Well this has to end badly for Trixie somehow if Psi-Nova plans on adapting Magic Duel eventually.
Trixie makes an interesting threat.
I have two words: I like.
This story is really taking me. The well-made plot and the change of the mares ties with Dusk and very well done, congratulations.
Now Trixie and he came to threaten and wants Dusk. poor, already damaged horn (little question. there is a risk that the horn becomes corrupted like the one that Queen Chrysalis though and a strange comparison, and I hope to have explained well what I mean). I will continue to follow you. keep it up.
( Sorry for the long absence but I've returned to read the rest! )
But holy hell did all that just happen so fast. I got confused by Minuette's and Lyra's actions and was dumbstruck as to what was going on. I mean I know we've all disliked Trixie at first, but sweet Luna!