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Okay, this chapter was amazingly. The fight between Soaring and Gentle along with Dash vs Fleetfoot was amazingly. I got to say that I didn't expected Gentle to be such a badass by effortlessly defeatinto Soaring in hand to hand.. This also leads me to another thing to ask. How in the hell did Fluttershy managed to find the strength to KO a guy with armor in one blow and leave a dent to his armor? Seriously, what type of original backstory did Shy had to do that. Dusk being psychically attacked by some being known as the Wolf was unexpected as it caused the non-pegasi members to fall from Cloudsdale, but also allowed RD to perform the Rainboom. The tidbit about Luna having a child with Starswirl was extremely surprising and almost as intriguing as the two princesses' aura when talking about the Wolf. RD finally confessing to Dusk was sweet, but the fact that Pinkie accidentally interrupted their sexy times was a bummer, though Fluttershy getting comfortable enough not to panic when Dusk accidentally groped her chest more than made up for it. Overall, amazing chapter.
and still a way to go
7568491 not so far as you think, don't worry
Nice job with this
7568625 thanks dj!
And glad for it. This is one of the better stories on this site.
7568841 Well thank you very much! It's due to a ton of assistance and support from readers and readers turned editors that have made this possible!
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Well thank you, but there is one part left!
Thanks! Both got a lot of work to make them flow properly.
I was just worried she'd be seen as a marry sue
Flash back to Dragonshy for a more detailed explanation, but she is a half breed earthpony/pegasi
Yep! This was part of the stuff that inspired me to form this story back in the day. This and the qualities that I disliked in many of the other Dusk Harem Fics.
Love, like anger can do incredible things.
Pinkie's good at being in the way at the wrong time. This is two for two she has interrupted Dusk and Dash if you remember 'the interview'. Will she get in the way during Part 5? Who can say!
Not that I'm foreshadowing anything for Fluttershy at all! Thanks a ton and see you soon!
Awesome chapter! So excited to read more! I can't believe it's been 2 years, this was one of the first stories I favorited and I've loved every minute since.
My thoughts while reading through it:
Everyone look at this turn of phrase! Look at it!
Fuck yeah, Rainbow Dash!
That's some good Fluttershy. High quality stuff. Rare too.
Love me some angry Dusk too. Especially, of the righteous variety.
It's happening!
Ok. I understand why she did/said what she did. But that doesn't mean I have to like it.
God I hate that sound.
Momlestia is best-lestia. Also, love the ... uh... energy of the two during this conversation.
Squee!
Fluttershy uses Bear Grills. Its Super Effective.
Someone is just asking for a faceful of planet cracker Rainboom style.
Pinkie is channeling Jar Jar Binks.
There is No accidents.
so I'm going to spoiler tag this just in case I'm right but Dusk is descended from Luna and Starswirl isn't he? and that last line from pinkie was genius
7568971 maybe they can punish Pinkie? XP
I'm loving your story so far, These two and a half year were not wasted my friend!!!
I'm so I'm love with this story. It is a legitimate thrill to see it each new chapter and I always look forward to updates. Thank you so much for making this as good as it is! I wish I had the words to give a proper review filled with insightful feedback on what makes this fic work for me, but I can never find the right words to do my feelings justice.
Sorry for the late reply.
grasp one of
It pains me to say this, but Rarity has committed the most egregious of all sins. She... is a filthy filthy shipper.
Initially I had theorized that Dusk was somewhere on the autistic spectrum, but he seems like way too much of a player.
Audience screaming "Just #### already!"
This story is amazing, and people like you have actually inspired me to start writing.
And the Wolf is almost definitely King Sombra.
Can't wait to see Rainbow Dash join the Dusk herd.
Pinkie... You boner killer.
Celestia and Luna, a song of fire and ice.
One of my favorite arcs so far and one that I was very much looking forward to. Some interesting reveals here and set-up for future. Looking forward to what comes next!
7569095 First of all, thank you, and everyone below for the comments. As a amiture writer, your thoughts, ideas and observations are so inspiring to me. I fully admit I wish I could write better/faster, but it's the things you all say that keep me working on this story, and make it fun for me!
Thanks! I know, right? I started in Late June 2014 and it's been a real ride ever since.
I am a huge nerd and will never stop loving this line.
When Dash does good, she does good.
Getting Shy right is important to me. She is going to be a huge part of the next chapter once Rainboom is done.
Dusk when he has a mission in mind is fun as hell.
You don't want to know how long i've been thinking about these things.
I have no clue what you are talking about. Now let me whistle innocently.
God I hate that sound.
Momlestia? Huh, I like it. Usually everyone is too busy with Moll, Troll and Control based Lestia's to focus on her.
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Fluttershy could grill bears if she wasn't so kindhearted.
Aww, she'd never do it, unless it was really necessary.
Writing Pinkie right is SO hard. But I love her when she works right!
Nahhhh. It's all just bad luck. Now drink the Kool-aid!
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What? No! Remember? Luna's only child Polaris died with only one child. And her grandfoal died helping to trap Tirek. For a refresher, check out Shining Armor's Interlude.
Also, thanks! Pinkie when done right is a joy!
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Well, they could always refuse to let her watch them have a sex while she is in the next room. That might work, right?
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Thanks! It's a joy to write most of the time too!
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Oh my! Well thank you very much! I have had very few reviews or detailed feedback, but it's always a joy to hear anything back, even if it is just simple thoughts and criticism! I'm glad you're still watching, and I'll try to keep it fun just for you
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No such thing! Thanks for your help and your comments man!
Oy vay! Good catch!
The worst kind of pony! Won't somepony think of the foals?!!
Short Answer: No such plans, but thanks haha. Longer answer crafted with the help of two of my editors:
They will, I promise.
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Aww! Well thanks!
Spoilers dude!
It's 85% of the theme of part 5. I swear. And my Celestia banish me to the moon if I lie.
The boner goddess Pinkie giveth and takeith away in ways no other pony can comprehend.
Magic & Imortality & very uncommon situation they haven't had to deal with in nearly 2000 years = fireworks!
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Thanks! Planning things out like this can take forever and can make me mentally exhausted and snippy, but when it works out, it's so rewarding! Next? A rellic, a lot of yelling, and some sex. A few more Wonderbolts make cameos. And more sex. And Barb finally returns to the cast. And a lot more yelling. Because yelling at Dusk for doing dumb shit is magic!
7656238 Oh wow. Thank you so much. I really need to get around to simply rewriting a lot of the early chapters.
edit: Checked with my editor. Not an error, but the second almost should have been italicized to help empathize the point.
Since no one else commented on it, Daring Do is the Special Ops agent mentioned, I'm calling it now. And once Dusk discovers the Daring Do books, he'll be reminded of that missive.