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It all adds up (I think) but the scar and the tears and the age gap and Masquerade's law. It all adds up
5034532 It does.
5034532 Let others figure it out for themselves and wait until a potential reveal to see if your suspicions are correct. do not just make assumptions and believe they are true until otherwise
5034578 That's why I didn't say it yet. Spoilers!
5035658 OK.
I knew this chapter was uploaded, but I didn't receive a notification. Am I the only one?
5035738 It's because of the glitch that happened when i accidentally hit publish last week and then tried to stop it. It's just gonna be a shock to some people I guess when Interlude 4 part 2 is released unless they follow my blog i guess ><;
Can't believe it took me this long to realize that this chapter was uploaded. Once again, you made an interesting chapter, judging by Cadence's liking to Sweetie Belle, her doubts about accepting Shining's proposal despite loving him, and a previous interaction with Redheart. Likewise, Redheart's act as a surrogate mother for the headstrong Scootaloo is an entertaining characterization for the nurse, who's earned a spot as my favorite side character of the story. Keep up the good work.
5069003 Thanks there was an accident due to my being super tired and hitting publish on the chapter before it had been edited so when i pulled it right away and then published it again a week later it didn't show up properly. My own fault. The good news is that I'm currently writing the last two scenes of the current chapter and Frankie is on the third last scene for editing, meaning that if all goes well it should only be another 2-4 days depending on editing time before the next chapter comes out.
On your comments: I am trying to characterize Cadence as best as possible as a woman torn between her love of children and Shining armor, and her fears about her own immortality. Redheart was never planed to be so major a character but she just grew into the role organically and I hope you like what comes in the next half of this chapter. If you ever want a sneak preview of what I'm currently working, feel free to pm me and I'll drop you a snip-it or two of the semi edited next chapter to wet your appetite.
5073100 Deleated for spoilers.
5073107
......sorry
5077264 it's ok man. Just wanna keep the mystery alive for those who haven't seen it yet!
Be advised: Any possible spoiler in the comments are more than likely going to be deleted. You have been warned.
5080966 What Frankie said guys. No problem with any criticism but I will have little to no tolerance for spoilers.
I'm starting to hate the word would.
Yeah...A lot of hints shown me that Scoot an orphan or abusive family.
Replace all 'Bell's' with 'Belle'
Other than that, I'm enjoying this story.