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Pinkie could do with listening to come of the old Flank Sinatra classics. Maybe Singing In The Rain.
Mobilising the Old Guard? something serious is going down.
This chapter was great. It was nice to see Dash bond with Surprise, Rumble, and her dad and it's surprising to see RD's father get back in the Wonderbolts. I really loved Pinkie and Dusk's interaction fork the way she flirted with him, to Dusk acting silly to amuse her and make her laugh. The kiss scene was very sweet, especially with the telepathic confession from Dusk, though Pinkie's reaction at the end was unexpected. Thanks for the amazing chapter.
No, Dusk! *rolled up newspaper* No double experiments! We reduce the number of variables and influences when testing, not increase!
An excellent chapter, and one that has me wondering...
Has Black Lotus come up in Trixie's context before? If I'm remembering right, one of the the effects (not sure if side or a part of the primary) is co-mingle various sources of magical energy, including one's life force and the regular mana field. Trixie's problem is an uncontrolled spillage from her Talent, one that appears to have existing, known effects. Zecora, our alchemical genius, has a cure for the effects of Black Lotus. I'm wondering if there's dots to be connected here, and if Dusk shall.
Yay! More excuses to re-read things. :) Again.
I really liked the notion of a possessive wing brush. Wings would logically be sensitive, thus it'd be equally logical that touches with them would be considered marks of affection. Combine that with the sheer size and the blanket-like quality and its actually surprising that this isn't seen more often in stories with winged creatures as love interests, FIM or otherwise.
her THAT she
I really adore the entire mood of Dusk and Pinkie's private interactions, so casual and playful. It's moments like these that really make me sigh in contentment at this story.
...wonder how he's gonna react when he finds out that the sixth sense thing is actually a familial trait shared between Pinkie and her sisters :P
I'm in love with Pinkie's reaction to Dusk's thoughts! It's a rare characterization to see her portrayed in, when it comes to serious emotions and commitments and her responding in a terrified, panicked manner. Most people portray her as very "go with the flow " and unflustered, especially in situations of romance, that it is a wonderfully new breath of fresh air that I'm eagerly looking forward to~
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A good suggestion to tell the truth. She's just not used to so much serious.
Requesting retired Wonderbolt's return to the field, and promoting cadet's on mass. Wonder whats happening with the Griffons.
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More Blitz in part 3!
Sometimes old generals get called back to the game.
I wanted to show a different aspect of Pinkie's character, that her laissez-faire attitude isn't just cause she's lazy, because she loves having no ties and nothing but freedom.
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Haha. Proper scientific method is important. But how often can you use the excuse to kiss a mare for science!
It has only come up twice, once with Dusk saving the Wonderbolt Cadet after the dragon, and once when Trixie saves Dusk from the baby Ursa. It's unrelated to her special talent, but her talent is has a somewhat similar effect. More will come, someday!
Fantastic! I love hearing feedback!
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Several of my editors have provided me with a lot of material to learn about the wing brushing and the like. It's grown to be one of my favorite fan concepts.
Pinkie's laissez-faire attitude is infectious, and even Dusk can't drown it all out.
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Por quoi?
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I am going for something very specific, and it's really really nice to see someone get that grove and feel it's their 'jam'. Pinkie's a nightmare to write, but I love her sometimes.
I have at long last finish reading every chapter that currently out and most say this,,,,,,,,,,,
great story keep up the good work
7116946 Yay! Great to hear my friend! And don't worry, there is plenty more to come, and to be explained.
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Have you seen The Gift of the Maud Pie yet?
Psi, I am dissapoint
eh not really but funnily enough I've been wondering just when the mind reading was coming back into play and had actually been preparing a comment asking why Dusk hadn't gone test crazy on this yet. then ya been me to my own question, sorta.
It seem Pinkie has some personal issue.
7162350 Not surprising enough?
I'm going back to these chapters in search of inspiration for my own fanfics. You're writing style is as relaxing as I remember. The affection of the characters is so enthralling and the tone just leaves me at peace somehow. Many attempts have been made to create a full Dusk Shine story, but in my opinion, this not only went so much farther than most, but was by far the best.