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Don't worry, guys. I was pretty shocked by the title, too.
5602750 Ha!
I really love this interlude. It was nice seeing Dash take responsibility for covering up for Gilda and for Celestia to be such a fair ruler. It was interesting that she and PP have been asked out by Dusk and that Shy is considering going out with him. The sex scene between her and pinkie was hot, especially with the piercings, yet intimate as Pinkie did it to teach Dash how to sleep with stallions (I'm a little surprised that Pinkie was the one that slept with Dash rather than Dusk but in retrospective injured guys shouldn't have sex so soon). Also, the chapter was intriguing in that Minuette and Lyra have motives to search for an unknown criminal (Inifinite Witch) that's related to Celestia and that somebody stole something important from Dusk. Anyway, this chapter was great and I hope to see how your Trixie will differ from the canon version.
And thus the most infamous piece of party artillery was born... The Party Cannon.
5602797 Thanks moon! Great to have your feedback and glad the different pairing choice went over so well!
5602808 I'm a sucker for cute little shout outs
The intruder was Trixie wasn't it?
5603400 haha. We shall see!
I am greatly looking forward to chapter 7. It's time for (my personal) best pony to show her greatness and power! Though I'm not excited for the idea that she has a cell prepped for her already, that title is AWESOME.
5605449 Haha. There was a LOT of debate about the name, and even five minutes before uploading this chapter, I wae torn between two of Flamerz suggestions and the eventual winner. Looking forward to seeing everyones reactions to how dramatically I have altered and expanded Boast Busters.
5605552
Nervocitement. Nervocitement everywhere!!!
If it's true that Celestia is bisexual, it's surprising that she hasn't asked Dusk to list his and other stallions "sizes" in the reports, if you catch my drift. Or maybe she tried to, but someone stopped her?
And, in response to your comment about your rendition of Boast Busters, if Snips and Snails bring an Ursa to town like in the show, I can imagine they won't be getting off with what is essentially a slap on the wrist and community service.
5605552 ORLY? What were the two suggestions this Flamerz guy made that you didn't use? Was it Cursed Reflections, Rouge Reflections, or the Absolute Mare; Allocation: Zero openings (or Amazo for short)?
5608548 Oh there will be Major reworkings of the whole episode. And a suggestion from my editors has me writing Snips and Snails back in when I'd cut them out as anything but cameo fodder before.
5608675 If I was writing a pure comedy AMAZO for life, yea goof.
Absolute Mare was very tightly fighting for the spot. Cursed was in third but far behind.
5608676 (le gasp) You mean my joke about that one thing actually turned into something substantial!? That's pretty neat!
5608708 That's the advantage of being an editor. Your whisper words corrupt my mind and snake into the depths of my imagination. Heck, because of some of the fantastic points brought up by Frankie, I've been rethinking the ending of the chapter and have reworked the Ursa back in. Because it fits!
5608728 Thank you for answering my second question, but you never answered my first. Did Celestia try to get Dusk to also include the stallions' dick sizes but get stopped?
5608856 Hahaha! A: no problem.
B: No, the Celestia excuse is a running joke at this point. The original intent was to have an excuse for why rather socially conservative Dusk would ask a mare her breast size. Once the joke caught on, I couldn't resist expanding it and turning Celestia's test of how close Dusk was to the other elements into "Celestia is a pervert, lol."
Celestia's sexuality on the other hand is easy to explain. She, like Pinkie, is pansexual. Thus she doesn't care about male or female, but rather the emotion behind the relationship. Thus why she has only had so few children, even before Luna's fall. She has outlived a small number of lovers and has gone through the pain of loss many times. It's hard to allow yourself to be close to someone when you know they will be dead in what is to her, just a few days. Sad, yes. But that is the cost of the immortal condition.
Wow, I really went off on a rant here. Hopefully I answered your questions fully!
5608915 Yes, it does. But caring about the emotion in a relationship instead of the gender is not pansexuality. That's demi-sexuality. If Celestia really were pansexual, than she'd have possibly had a lot more flings than you're implying.
5608947 Haha. OK, now that I'm up and properly awake! I like your reference to demisexuality, but as I understand its definition, it looks to me like Celestia could be both. The major factor in my opinion is her lack of interest in her lovers sex. In any case, thank you for the interesting ideas. If you ever have any others, no matter how off the wall or crazy, please feel free to contact me here or by pm!
5609511 Yeah, I have one, if it hasn't already been done: The CMC sneaking some hard cider, if the Apples even make it.
5609550 Yeah, then they could use it to spike something of DT's.
5578789 Careful, there are bronies that like Gilda out there... not as common as those who like Trixie, but they still exist. Heck, there are even some that like Gilda MORE than Trixie. Case and point, Diaries of a Madman.
5370378 Will he get dazzled? Will he feel the Blaze? Will he feel sonata mused? Only time will tell.
Handicapping Dusk like this was really unexpected.
Mistress? Pet? Huh. It seems everyone like to make Flutters play the pet.
Filthy... Mare? Did I read that right?
It's funny that the episode in question started as a Pinkie/Dash bonding. And that's how this one ends.
Blue mane? I always considered it more white, maybe a bit silvery.
Ok...So if you follow the show (episode 100 to be specific) in some manner...Bon Bon and Lyra are both agents of different organization working for the same government...That would be a hilarious confrontation.
Also...Lyra is one of Dusk old friends....
Don't tell me...all of his old friends are agents...
We already have Minuette, now we have Lyra...