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Great chapter. It was interesting to see the dynamic between Bronze and RD. Gotta say, the idea of them taking massage lessons to help Dusk overcome his back problems is very interesting and I loved the subtle way those two flirted with each other. Brinze's advice on RD joining the herd and how to ask permission to join was interesting, especially since she mentions hoe much commitment is needed. The ending with AJ and Rarity appearing while Bronze encourages to show RD her "compatibility" was sexy. Would the scene appear in the next chapter? Anyways, thanks for the chapter.
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Thanks! And welcome back Moon!
Thanks! Trying to build up the inner relationships between the herd is really important to me. Haha.
It's something i've been building up to, and am glad I was finally able to get it to happen.
A lesbian foursome? I'd love to make it happen, but I'm nowhere near capable enough to write such a scene. Mind you, I do have plans for harem orgy later on in the season. That's going to be a nightmare to write.
hehehe poor dashie,
and poor dusk, I can see the 4 mare show up at dusk place see him tied up and bound up on the bed unable to move
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Now now, Barb's protective of Dusk, but the little dragoness isn't THAT protective... Yet.
7927915 oh i think she is just hide it, i can so see her spike his drink with soemthign to mkae him pass out when he was in city
7927441 Wouldn't that be worse for his back? I mean I know from experience that moving an injured limb into a new position is painful and trying to keep the limb there is even worse. Tying him up like that just seems like it would be bad for his back
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Oh. Just Wow! This is my favorite conversation thread in the comments for a while! Simply love it!
You might have a good point on bondage themes though, but this is a chronic muscle issue that Dusk suffers from, so it probably alters the otherwise very valid point you've made.
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Haha. That's one of the scenes I've altered over and over time and again to make her playful teasing run through the conversation. I think when I start a reedit of the story in the next few months, hopefully I will find a way to mooth it over better. Thanks for your interest so far!
7954740 Maybe someday I'll go into the side story of Princess Cadance and the Wingrott outbreak in Canterlot. But yeah the vague explination here is mostly to leave the details up to the readers imagination. Glad you found Dash’s empathy with Scoot believeable!
7966524 Haha. Been so long I had to reread to remember about Meadow Song. I am a horribly easy distracted writer.
7973658 Thanks! There are a lot of great lines hidden here and there that I simply love. But man I need to rewrote all this old stuff