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Psi-nova


Just another FiM fan whoes decided to write his own Story and some Smutt.

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  • 357 weeks
    Writing Resumed! Health update

    So I had thought I did this a week ago, but since it's clear I didn't, I'd better do it sooner then later!

    I have started working on the story again!

    *Listens to the sound of crickets roaring*

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  • 360 weeks
    33rd birthday. Still in hospital update:

    So i turn 33 today. Feeling better then most mornings so far, but also had my best sleep since i got here. Slept past 7 am for first time in ages when normally i struggle to get past 530

    Overall ceel much better, but time will tell how long till i get to go home.

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  • 362 weeks
    In icu at hopital.

    No word on timeline. Massive blood pressure issue to adress first.

    Sorry for this but you all for reading.

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  • 367 weeks
    Just a update note

    Just wanted to let you all know that Chapter 16 : Dog and Pony / Stare Master - part 3 is finished and will be uploaded any day now. Also, Duelist and Shawkthorne did redits of parts 1 and 2 so if you need / want a refresher take a look!

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  • 385 weeks
    Update to the Glossery

    Long long long long long long, long overdue, and I apologize for it!

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Jul
29th
2014

A breakdown of Planned Events. [Updated for Season 1 Chapters] · 10:20pm Jul 29th, 2014

All that follows is a tease to torment those of you following my story close! More will be added as the details for the episodes get set in stone.


Prologue - Dusk's last day at school before being sent to Ponyville.
Pending rewrite:
-Missing or poorly handled foreshadowing for several future event's
-General cleanup of poorly written parts of the story

Chapter 1 - Introduction to Ponyville
S1E1 from start to Pinkie Pie's party in the library

Interlude 1 - A Heart of Roses / Smalltalk at Pinkie's Party
After Dusk is rushed to the bathroom with a local nurse to help him, the citizen's of Ponyville talk with one another about the day's event's.

Chapter 2 - The Rise of Nightmare Moon
S1E1 from Barb calling for Dusk to join them for the Summer Sun Celebration until Dusk's encounter with Nightmare Moon in The Castle of The Two Sisters.

Chapter 3 - The War for Princess Luna
SE2 from Dusk's encounter with Nightmare Moon at The Castle of the Two Sisters until the end of the episode.

Interlude 2 - The Princess of the Night
Luna's first Night in Canterlot.

Interlude 3 - Private Conversations
In one day four Element's of Harmony visit Dusk at the Library. And a Fifth guest arrives in the night.

Chapter 4 - The Ticket Master
S1E3 - Dusk is gifted two tickets for the Grand Galloping Gala so he might bring a date. But how will he handle the pressure from his other 4 friends who all have valid reasons to go?

Chapter 5 - Applebuck Season
S1E4 - With Big Mac out of comission will AJ admit she needs help sometimes?

Chapter 6 - Griffon the Brush-Off
S1E5 - No plans so far for this ep

Chapter 7 - Boast Busters
S1E6 - The arrival in Ponyville of a Unicorn whoes skill with magic has been used to shame all commers, why is Dusk so scared of defending his friends Honour?

Chapter 8 - Dragonshy
S1E7 - With a dragon sleeping in the mountians near Ponyville the Main 6 are sent to attempt to drive it off one way or another.

Chapter 9 - Look Before You Sleep
S1E8 - With a horrific Storm trapping AJ and Rarity at the Library with Dusk, will recent developments be revealed?

Chapter 10 - Bridle Gossip
S1E9 - A strange Zebra who lives in the Everfree Forest leads Dusk to confront his Friends with their own closed minds.

Chapter 11 - Swarm of the Century
S1E10 - The recent Discovery of a strange but cute new species soon starts Dusk and friends with their hands full just hours before Princess Celestia arrives for a visit.

Chapter 12 - Winter Wrap Up
S1E11 - The realization that sometimes he must not use magic to hang out and celibrate things with his friends Dusk is unable to find his place during the end of winter.

Chapter 13 - Call of the Cutie
S1E12 - No solid plans for this episode but happy to for any concepts / suggestions anyone might offer.

Chapter 14 - Fall Weather Friends
S1E13 - With recent contests between AJ and Dash leading the two into an angry fued; Dusk finds himself split between two friends.

Chapter 15 - Suited for Success
S1E14 - Rarity suddenly finds herself barried under a project that puts her sense of style at war with her friends. How will this effect her and Dusk's faltering romance?

Chapter 16 - Feeling Pinkie Keen
S1E15 - As an Obsessive student, Dusk refuses to beleave in Pinkie's sixth sense leading to a crazy and exhausting day.

Chapter 17 - Sonic Rainboom
S1E16 - With Dash at last getting her chance to show off for the Wonderbolts as well as both Princesses in public, she needs all the help she can get from her friends, even if the show is going to happen in a place only Pegasus can normaly go.

Chapter 18 - Stare Master
S1E17 - In order to help Rarity out Fluttershy takes the CMC for one night, the resulting events of the night bring her and Dusk far closer then both had ever thought possable.

Chapter 19 - The Show Stoppers
S1E18 - No plans for this episdoe at the moment but intrested in suggestions / Concepts.

Chapter 20 - A Dog and Pony Show
S1E19 - Kidnapped by the Diamond Dogs, Rarity shows a woman can fight without a weapon.

Chapter 21 - Green Isn't Your Color
S1E20 - Suddenly a popluar fashion model due to a eccentric photographer, will Dusk's fragile relationship with Shy hold together while Rarity is torn by her jealousy over her friends fame.

Chapter 22 - Over a Barrel
S1E21 - No plans for this episode yet.

Chapter 23 - A Bird in the Hoof
S1E22 - When Fluttershy attempts to help Princess Celestia's sick pet bird, Dusk finds himself now torn between his duty to the princess and taking care of his friend.

Chapter 24 - The Cutie Mark Chronicles
S1E23 - Who woudln't want to know how Dash got her Cutie Mark? But along the way the CMC learn even more about the rest of her friends.

Chapter 25 - Owl's Well That Ends Well
S1E24 - No plans for this ep

Chapter 26 - Party of One
S1E25 - With everyone suddenly refusing to spend time with Pinkie pie, Dusk gets a glimpse into the emotional problems of a party animal everyone loves.

Chapter 27 - The Best Night Ever
S1E26 - At last the night has come and with his five friends on hand Dusk leads the group to the night of their dreams. And yet in the end their night is spend realizing few dreams come true that easily.

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Comments ( 4 )

Don't you mean 5 friends in the Grand Galloping Gala episode?

2327030 I get the confusion but he has two tickets and five friends, made more complicated in my version due to the fact Celestia's letter will states its a for him to bring a Date, not just a friend.

Just a couple of my thoughts on some of these chapters.

Interlude 3 - Private Conversations
In one day four Element's of Harmony visit Dusk at the Library. And a Fifth guest arrives in the night.

I see in this chapter Dusk is going to start intimate relations with one of his friends.:twilightblush:

Chapter 6 - Griffon the Brush-Off
S1E5 - No plans so far for this ep

I don't have any thoughts about this episode either.

Chapter 7 - Boast Busters
S1E6 - The arrival in Ponyville of a Unicorn whose skill with magic has been used to shame all comers, why is Dusk so scared of defending his friends Honour?

I am so glad you have plans of this episode (Trixie is my favorite pony:trixieshiftleft:)

Chapter 9 - Look Before You Sleep
S1E8 - With a horrific Storm trapping AJ and Rarity at the Library with Dusk, will recent developments be revealed?

What? Dusk and his mare (AJ or Rarity) are going to try to keep their relationship secret?

Chapter 13 - Call of the Cutie
S1E12 - No solid plans for this episode but happy to for any concepts / suggestions anyone might offer.

This is the creation of the Cutie Mark Crusaders (CMC). This has to be in there somehow. Unfortunately, there would hardly be any focus of the Mane Six and would have to be more on the foals of the show. Especially, since we haven't meet Scootaloo yet.

Chapter 18 - Stare Master
S1E17 - In order to help Rarity out Fluttershy takes the CMC for one night, the resulting events of the night bring her and Dusk far closer then both had ever thought possible.

I would think so, if Fluttershy got Dusk unpetrified.

Chapter 19 - The Show Stoppers
S1E18 - No plans for this episode at the moment but interested in suggestions / Concepts.

Not one of my favorites. If done, again, it would have to concentrate on the CMC putting on some type of show (maybe with them trying to do a show with each other's talents like in the series?).

Chapter 21 - Green Isn't Your Color
S1E20 - Suddenly a popular fashion model due to a eccentric photographer, will Dusk's fragile relationship with Shy hold together while Rarity is torn by her jealousy over her friends fame.

Dusk is actually going to become the model?:pinkiegasp: SWEET!!:pinkiehappy:

Chapter 22 - Over a Barrel
S1E21 - No plans for this episode yet.

Please leave it that way.:facehoof:

Chapter 25 - Owl's Well That Ends Well
S1E24 - No plans for this ep

IF you do this episode, please make the owl anthro. Maybe a child around the same age as the CMC. Yet, he is very smart for his age. You could even make the owl Pipsqueak.:rainbowlaugh:


However, if you really can't find a way to write an episode into your story, spend a couple of paragraphs in the next chapter briefly summarizing what happened.
Sorry if I got carried away.:twilightblush:

2352205 !!!!! Oh god you are officially my favorite person now! :yay:
So basically I like your answer to several of the eps, at this time I don't think I will skop any ep, and male owl anthro would make up for the lack of spike for romantic misunderstandings with the cmc.

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

boast busters is like the one ep I have the most changes in plan for iutside of nightmare night and thats sadly season 2.

:moustache: oh don't worry, both shy and dusk get into the modeling act.
:twilightsmile: thanks for the feedback, its great to have someone offering ideas andor help.

:trixieshiftright: ?:scootangel:! :yay: !

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