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A great evil has returned to Equestria. An army of pure hatred has risen. The power of Friendship will fail.

When a dark void like mass appears over Equestria, Princess Twilight gathers her friends to face the threat. She would soon find that her greatest asset would be her downfall. Twilight Sparkle can not win this battle.

Join an unlikely alliance bound by the greatest threat they have ever faced before. Enemy and friend alike will fight side by side to halt the advance of.....

The Great One!

So yeah this is one of the most epic and insane pony stories ever written, but oops I spilled Chocolate Chip Juice on all but chapter 19. Hopefully it can still be fully understood as a standalone story.

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Wait, is Tank the Great One? I am surprisingly okay with this.
If it's not tank then who give me more chapters

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Don't you remember? Tank obtained the Crystalline Relic of Sorrows just before giving his life to save Manehattan from The Great Moochick in chapter 10. How could you forget that it was like the most tragic scene in the entire story?

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And of course now I'm kicking myself for not having thought of that.

Great story! Even without the first eighteen chapters and the last five, the story lives up to it's juice-ridden name!

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I apologize, you just haven't updated in so long, I just forgot.. I'm going to go back and read it again, though.

Chocolate chip juice sounds amazing right about now :D too bad it murdered the rest if your story though

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My eyes hurt.. I think I cried a little too much..

You are a bad troll. A very bad troll.

GOD DAMN YOU HUMAN!!!

Bit of an issue with not putting new speakers as new paragraphs, and there's missing punctuation at the end of quotation marks, but the idea is remarkable.

One can only imagine the series of events that led up to this point, and how it probably all makes sense in context.

This gave me a "Twilight Sparkle's 505th Birthday" vibe. You should totally read that story by the way. :D

Well, you were right. It is really epic. Tis a shame you spilled appleCHOCOLATE CHIP juice on some of the chapters.

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Apple juice? PFFFFFT, It was CLEARLY chocolate chip juice. What do you take me for, a HEATHEN?

6656304 sorry. Typo. I obviously meant to type chocolate chip juice. Sorry

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THE DAMAGE IS DONE!

6656325 here, lemme fix my comment.

6656443 FORGIVE ME SENPAI, FOR I DID NOT KNOW MY WRONGS!

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I want you to DENOUNCE the evil of apple juice forever!

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Wow. XD That was a thing I just read!

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