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InvaderSplorch
Passionate writer that is still exploring new grounds. Trying out various schemes and writing styles. I hope you enjoy!
InvaderSplorch
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I had to man, oh god, I'm a bad person.
Thanks for the great time!
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Well, I'm glad you got a great reaction out of it! Spread the word....we need more Colgate fics 
*Bows and walks away* Yes, Massa Splorch.
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Well, I do have a multi horror fic involving Colgate and ponies, but it's still in the planning faze
4717756 Oh?
4717761 Yup. I regret nothing. Allayh Jhadi go!
More Colgate fits now I said nownownownow gogogogogogogo
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I'll try my best. I believe I will make it into a slice of life/romance story with multiple chapters. Undecided on the rating ATM 
Why is the pic humanized but it's listed as anthro?
4718814 because there humans with fur hooves and a tail now do you understand
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Aggressive much?
What is a fur hoof? Is that in place of the hands?
Forget romance fics, we don't have enough Colgate fics, but this one is arguably the best. The main character is likeable, it's romantic with a dash of humor, the writing is very descriptive and paints the scene very well, and...it's really sect. Great job.
4719512 yes this is truth
4719509 I meant fur, hooves ,and tails better dude
Colgate has always been my favorite pony. I'm glad people are raising Colgate Awareness.
4718814 The original pic was requested to be taken down since it was NSFW. It had her clothed, but it still violated the site's policies. Willing to oblige, I had to swap it for another pic, and the other one was her in a nurse's outfit (which doesn't pertain to this story at all). Sorry for any confusion!
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Thank you for the clarification.
4719835 No problem, I could probably PM you the link to it if you still wanted it.
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Could you?
4719847 Yep! Hold on.
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Thanks for all the kind comments and motivation! I am honestly considering making an actual story with multiple chapters about these two.
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Oh? Well then, I offer my full support.
Well hello there, my friend. I have upvoted and read as requested, and will be giving you my opinion when we meet today. Good story, just the issue of switching tense and a few mistakes that would be easy to fix if your proof reader wasn't MIA.
Looking forward to seeing you tonight bby 
Given he was hammering her damned cervix at the top of the paragraph, I can only conclude that something has gone wrong and there's a *real* mess. Also, that office doesn't have a mop, according to your own words, so there's no way they're cleaning all that up.
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This is gonna be bad, I can just tell.
4721772 Well, she couldn't hold it all, but...
I forgot about the mop.
Oh Dear, that's going to be really messy
Unless they have paper towels and a bucket of water.
Star Trek reference? Or just a coincidence?
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Just a coincidence.
4722495 k then...XD
4722394 or just don't go in the office while it 'dries up' then get some cleaner or some shit.Y'know.cleaning.
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They'll probably need some kind of scraper since it still leaves a residue on the surface.
The ony thing I disliked was the tence and how often it switched. Other than that, I think that was the best kinky story I've read in a long while.
4723413 Yea my regular proofreader/editor was busy so I couldn't have them look at it properly. Luckily, my close friend has taken me up on my offer to be the new one, with their specialty being in change of tence. So, at least now, I will definitely be looking for my tence structure in future work. That being said, thank you for your honest opinion and the constructive feedback. I need this to make my work better
. Other than that, glad you enjoyed it 
4723080 hmmm.Lick it up?hmm...this is a hard issue to solve...
4723647 Yes, quite difficult to clean. Unless more fluid was added to it?
4723941 hm...Twilight has a science expiriment to conduct(story ideas!)
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Have noooooo clue how to incorporate that into this story. Wait....what if...no no that wouldn't work. 
4723965 hmm....maybe twilight needs a (less than) willing subject to test her theory on...?
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Oh it was my pleasure (literally) but anyways No need to thank me
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Nah, gratitude needed for feedback. I mean if you can spot this as well, could I ask a favor of you? 
4k words is romantic clop?.....
i do say this is a marvelous story, but i do have to complain a bit about the pacing. it seemed a bit rushed to me. other than that great story.
4730172 I did this story SOLELY off pure whim and chance. While I made sure the grammar was fine, I could've added more. Doesn't mean that there couldn't be a sequel.
4732235 Hmmm, what parts felt rushed to you? Any criticism is greatly accepted and acknowledged.
4733508 well my good sir i felt that the beggining of the clop scene was a bit rushed. you could have dragged it out a bit more and it would of felt like nice pacing. i hope i didnt offend you at all.
4735000 Hmm, good point actually. There were a couple of dialogue bits as well as description paragraphs that could have been worded better or redone altogether. While I REALLY wanted to fix them, I had to ab-stray. The goal of this was to write a story that was purely based off whim and within a week. I wrote this in two days with just grammatical proofreading. Everything else screamed for me to fix it, but I was curious if I could write a decent work of fiction in that short amount of time, or whether I needed to sit down and compose myself for a few hours a day.
Results: Grammar is perfectly fine.
Tense/Rushed scenes - These need to be sat down and mulled over as I found flaws in my work.
Thank you again for your input.