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Hurray! It is finally here!
Although I'm not usually much of a fan of anthro ponies, I am a fan of this. It deserves upvotes galore!
y u do dis
Nice job, an error here and there, but still a nice job.
5890234 It's been quadruple checked.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
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5890244 are you fucking implying it have not
fappedseen that?regular ponies are still better
5890247 I'd check again, 'cuz I found,
This.
5890244 Thank you.
5890259 dammit.![:trixieshiftleft:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftleft.png)
5890271 Sorry to burst your bubble.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
It's finally out~!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
After reading:![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
I normally don't like clop fics, at all, but I'd read any one that you write. I was both interested in this because YOU wrote it, and stuck around because you wrote it SO WELL! You did such a good job with this!
Not really sure why anyone hasn't pointed it out yet, so I'll make the post. Also, enjoy the ten hour version.
I feel obligated to make a joke, but it's just too easy.
This was enjoyable. Not bad for your first story.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5890495
Maybe nobody has actually read it and these are all just pity comments.
Thank you for the kind words.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
Now we need a second chapter about Twinkleshine waking up covered in stallions xD
5890532 *Nudge nudge* Inside joke.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
It was an interesting read! Good job!
5890538![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
"Inside", you say?
*Cough* Sexy Assistant This is a
greatstory5890618 Yes it is. I actually needed some clarification on that, so thank you.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Wow.
That was a great story XD
5890715 Awww, thank you.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
5890622 I just have one question is that a typo or an error?
"thorough"
5890726 As long as I'm mortal that can be arranged.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5890719 No prob.
Just keep up the good work :)
Quite possibly the shortest clop fic I have ever liked.
5890733 Wow, thank you.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
5890729 Da...ok ^^
*cums with the force of a thousand ballistae*
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5890757 Ouch, better get that in ice.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
For goodness' sake, get rid of my name on the description. I'm happy to help, but the last thing I need for my reputation is me attached to a clopfic as its proofreader.
Sorry and thank you.
I thought I would let you know you put ' gets lucky with a gets lucky' in your short description.
.... That's hot. Why is anthro so amazing?
Found my weekend reading material.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Is this an entry for the Fun in the Sun contest by Ebony Stallion?
Psst: if it isn't, it may as well be. ;)
5890812 rofl, are you being serious..?![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
5890831 edited.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
5890882 lel, it's funny that. He made the competition after I offered to make the story. It was a bit weird really.
You spoiled the ending, how could you?![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
5890912 >tfw you read a clopfic and you're in suspense about whether sex is about to happen or not.
5890919 Unsure boner is the best boner
5890891
I have no idea, unfortunately.
5890919
You haven't read Pound Cake x King Sombra OTP!?
5890935 I'm sorry about that though, I didn't know it was serious.
5890936 No, should I have..?
5890944
It's a story that keeps you guessing if sex will happen.
Welp..
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Time to get a workout in.
I heard this was one of your first stories. Congratulations on making a fabulous debut.
5891118 Oh thank you. It's taken me so long to write something.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
You had me turned on at KFC.![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
The arousal could only grow more as the story progressed!
This is the closest I've come to jerking it to a story. Haven't done it yet.
10/10 one of the hottest clopfics I've ever read. Also, I love anthro, so that definitely helps.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Hoooolyyyy sheit!
This was AMAZINGLY written, and as a first attempt, you as a writer show promise, even outside of the clop scene. You've earned yourself a like, and a follower.
Your title would look a little better if it was like this: Colgate's Trip to the Beach
5891472 I wasn't sure about that. Thank you.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
5891484 No problem!