Frederic Horseshoepin is Equestria's most talented pianist. Music is his life. But...He may not feel like playing anymore.
Luckily for him, Pinkie is the princess of playing. Maybe a few notes could change their lives forever.
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Interesting idea for a pairing, I'd like to see how this story will proceed.
And no, didn't really notice that until you mentioned it. I'm surprised how so many bronies have eagle eyes when it comes to this kind of stuff.
Awww, what a cute story. I know how the poor guy feels. Hope to see more of this story, good sir.
4710377 It's a two parter, so the date is coming next. (That and they'll show up in some of the other stories set in this AU.){What's with the deleted comments?)
4710381 sorry about those. Computer errors was being a pain in the plot, no worries
4710381 Also, what does AU stand for
4710516 Alternate Universe. I'm treating it as such, kind of like Kilala and her work. (So, strange shippings will abound here.
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4710526 Okay, that's cool.
Very sweet first chapter. We really feel Freddy regretting dating his childhood friend, now he feels like he's lost his girlfriend AND his best friend. Since this is in the same 'verse as Love Needs No Reason, is the Princess of Love going to show up to coach Pinkie? Or maybe the Princess of Friendship will help Freddy salvage his original friendship with Beauty Brass?
LOL fourth wall joke!
Nice save by Rarity
Also, hot sauce on dessert?...Meh it's Pinkie Pie
You know what has to happen now. Beauty Brass takes up with a snooty Prench stallion who spits in Frederick's general direction.
This was refreshing. I never know what to think when someone breathes life into a character (or a few) with no canon personality, but you've done an enjoyable job of it. Pinkie and Rarity both feel true to themselves, and the writing itself flows nicely. Perhaps you could do with a bit more scene description, though -- most of the chapter was in monologue for Rarity or dialogue between the other three. I'd personally like to get a sense of the environment they're in, too. Just something to think about.
Have a great day!
4857851 I usually delve more into that, but this was in first person. So yeah...I'm still working on it.
And thank you for commenting. I thought people forgot about this story or just didn't like it.
Yeah, I had to do Frederic some justice. I mean, he's a season 1 character with a notable appearance in the finale! How does he not have a ton of artwork and fics. (I've seen a handful of fics about him and only a scant few art-pieces.)
4857902
Well, in truth I probably wouldn't have said anything, but you asked nicely and I noticed the story didn't have many comments. I'm usually the type that just reads and faves if I like something, and comments are saved for rare occasions.
4859321 Well, I'd like to say that I appreciate it very much so.
What? Its a good story! And yeah, I notice it doesnt have very many views, comments or likes compared to your other stuff, but that might just be because of your story is complete, the more time that goes by the farther it gets filed in the backlog of the search engine. Question, did you do the title card yourself?
4910089 I wish. Cyanjames2819 actually did it for me. I can draw, but not well enough.
Were those some hints at some Rarity/Gustave? If so I approve.
5476762 You have found me out.
I ship it.
I can kinda relate and nice job
I ship it. I ship just about anything if I like the way it sails. Speaking of.... Rarity/Gustave?
My bags are packed. When do we board?
Tell me about it
Well this is a pretty interesting pairing here and a very underrated character as well a pony name Frederic and he's been really down lately ever since Beauty Brass reject his love that she doesn't feel the same way about him and he felt like his world is falling apart and he'll never find anybody like her again until Pinkie Pie showed up and apparently it really cheered him up by playing a music and it really helped him and he thinks her for cheering her up and she was about to leave with Rarity until he asked Pinkie Pie on a date which that was pretty fast but he really wanted to see her again and Pinkie Pie was pretty surprised she never been on a date before so this is going to be an interesting dating experience for her
Okay you're moving a little bit too fast buddy let's just see how the dates go first đ
Well that's kind of mean man
Pinkie Pie shook her head. âNope, this is for my desert.â
I tried to stop the bile that reached my throat. âHot sauce? On your desert?â
dessert
Yeah the town see pretty much everything though season 1-9
Awww Frederic is pretty nervous about his date and it doesn't really help that some of these people from the restaurant is not helping especially at the front and he was about to cause a little bit more trouble good thing Rarity came in just in time but throughout the night they look like Frederic and Pinkie Pie are pretty enjoying themselves especially with each other even talking about likes and dislikes and everything this is pretty nice
Yeah about that I know this is way before the story came around and the episode came in way later so I had to treat this as an alternate universe
The first time I saw that character and now I think about it basically he was the first Griffin made himself a big time out of his hometown of Griffon stone
Well that was a very interesting story so it looks like Rarity was pretty happy for Pinkie and Frederic but it looks like Rarity has some interesting history with Gustav and he really wanted to thank her for everything meanwhile things are going pretty well until they saw Beauty bass sure he has some mixed emotion with her but he doesn't want to have a bad term with her and Pinkie kind of felt that and tell her that everything will be fine so he apologized to Beauty and it looks like things are going to be okay and it looks like Frederick really wanted to see Pinkie Pie a little bit more even though this is going to be a very interesting one to hang out with well I would say this was a pretty good story I kind of wish there was more to it but a it was still good keep up the good work