When the Mane Six are captured by weird vines, it doesn't take a genius to realize that the Plundervines are back, but under a new villain's control! It looks like they'll need help--but not from their world!! In this epic crossover, Tails (from Sonic) and his cousin T.J. (fanmade character) arrive to help even the field, but find out that they might be in over their heads!! Will our heroes win the day? Will evil prevail? AND JUST WHAT THE HAY IS GOING ON?!?!
While there are quite a few errors in your story so far, i do see some potential in your writing. for that, i will give this an upvote and continue reading.
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Thanks for the comment. I'll remove the errors when the story's over.
Not bad of a story!
This looks good, but am I missing some backstory here?
5002334 Not really. There's no back story, but there WILL be a sequel.
4912127 Thanks.
5002334 Nope. This is chapter one.