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Black Hailstorm


A never-ending storm of ideas

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My father abandoned me, my mother disappeared, my sister a traitor. All I have left is the tattered remains of my honor, and the only thing keeping me going is my will.

Prince Zuko has lost his honor and is no longer sure if the path he had originally chosen to follow is the one he wants anymore. When his uncle, Dragon of the West, Iroh gives him advice the former prince travels through the streets of Ba Sing Se in an attempt to find the one that can guide him down the right path he so greatly desires.

However when Zuko meets this man, he finds the man to be in fact a spirit. A spirit that has helped countless other souls through both the spirit world and earth reach inner peace. And now the spirit has sent Zuko to Equestria to find a means of peace there. With Zuko now stuck in a world he does not understand nor care much about the exiled prince must figure out a way to return home and avoid the ponies of Equestria all while struggling with his emotional turmoil.

The question still remains though; can Zuko's indomitable will be broken with the challenges he will face in this world, or will he fight his way back home and find inner peace as well?

Time is all that can tell.


Set after Book 2 of ATLA.

Additional Characters: Twilight, etc.
Additional Tags: Dark, Psychological, Drama.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 19 )

Hope to see more :D

Sometimes I use big words to look like I know what I'm up to, but I don't always know what they photosynthesis

You NEVER ask about the scar, great story so far keep it up

oh joy zuko gets to run into what probably is the pony version of his father

i would of given this a like if you had the balls to just have Zuko set pinkie and fluttershy on fire. that would of been fucking funny.

as much as i dislike it dash is right they shouldn't let someone they just met come with them, especially someone with that short a temper. and ad a dash to the growing pony pyre.

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True true and I will.

Also, having Zuko set Pinkie and Fluttershy and fire for their comment, may seem funny, but wouldn't really go with his personality. I'm doing this with Zuko's persona in mind, and him burning them for their statements, would have been just as bad as when Aang accidentally burnt Katara. It just isn't right.

Plus, that would have changed things a lot. To the point where there could have been a serious fight between him and the others, which Zuko most definitely would end up losing in the long run.

6888423 This was just a filler?......RUN!

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It was indeed. Interested in expressing your thoughts on this chapter? Discussions are always welcomed


I look forward to the next chapter:pinkiehappy::coolphoto:

greetings and luck

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why isn't it the fic in a avatar group.

Puffs my cig before putting it out, hmmm emotions And a story within a story huh? Now this could go places

At least she didn't call him ZuZu. I bet that would have really burned him up. :eeyup:

Damn shame that this is cancelled. It really grabbed my attention and there are barely any Zuko stories on this site and I would've loved to see this story completed.

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