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The Cowardly Writer


Comments ( 11 )

Dude keep writing this was great!:pinkiehappy::heart:

Pretty good, and I haven't seen a Spike/Elusive clopfic until now:pinkiehappy:

Finally. A Spike X Elusive clop fic. The clop was pretty good and I did enjoy the set up of it all. It was a really good story overall. :twilightsmile:

Yay! I want you to write more like this! More Spike x Elusive!

Decent with some errors in the writing; grammar and capitalization but enjoyable.

Nice lead in and follow up for the story

This intro into the story was handled wonderfully :raritystarry: To quote Rarity/Elusive, "Simply divine darling!" :raritywink: I wish I had half the writing skill. All characters seemed quite in character, considering this is a clop fic I consider that a feat that makes the story that much better when achieved. :twilightsmile: Now onto the actual clopping! :trollestia: :yay:

Very cringe-worthy dialogue, and out of character terms and phrases coming from elusive. Unfortunate that I couldnt finish it.

Sequel when?

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