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I'm an avid fan of My Little Pony and Avatar: the Last Airbender. Pizza is my favorite food. I love getting to share my works with others!

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You know you're going to have to write about the party now, right? :raritystarry:

If the boner police show up, imma need a good lawyer.:trollestia:

4421624 Oh my, won't that be a crowded affair.

:trollestia:

4422292 lol :rainbowlaugh:

I'll put in a good word for ya with Mayor Mare. :trollestia:

Comment posted by Jake The Army Guy deleted Oct 23rd, 2018

4424781 Well, it's actually all thanks to a potion from Zecora (as seen in my first fic), but since everybody can drink a simple potion, I do believe the "everybody" folder works well. :ajsmug:

Also thanks for the criticism, and for enjoying it anyway. :twilightsmile:

Picture is so kawaii:rainbowkiss:

Derpy blushed and saluted, before turning around and flying away to the next stop on her mail route. Twilight watched the grey-coated pegasus go, licking her lips as she admired that bubble butt. “I am gonna wreck that ass.”

Did something happen that we don't know about yet?

I am usually disgusted by this through and through nonsense, but for some reason I got my rocks off on it. Also this was suprisingly romantic for what was on the label.

surain? what about pyruvate?....

4427449 Glad I could buck the trend. :twilightsmile:

4425843 Well, this is set in the same world as my other stories here, so if you haven't read those than maybe? :applejackunsure:

But anyway, that line's really just Twilight being a perv. :twilightblush:

4428173 If you're talking about that new comic in-progress with Rarity and Spike in the goo that keeps putting him in girly clothes, funny story there. I actually started work on this long before that comic started. Seeing it almost made me not post this for fear of getting called a copycat. :twilightoops:

4430383 I've read 'Zecora's Big Surprise' and 'Spike's Royal Rear'. Yet, I don't recall Derpy being mentioned at all, and she acted like she knew exactly what Twilight was talking about. That's why I ask if what happened with Derpy is going to show up in a different story.

4430444 Ah, you mean that. No, I don't imagine much happened with Derpy. She's just a part of this slowly growing circle of sex buddies, more or less.

4430391 but what about the stand alone images of that he made way before the comic was started?.....

4430745 Never saw them. If he has his own site I don't go to it, so it's quite easy to imagine I don't come across everything he's done through other sites.

4431026 no he just has the usual accounts on the usual sites which all have his work on it.....

4431154 If you're accusing me of ripping him off, just say it.

4431433 when did i say that?.....
how is such a thing even feasible? it's not like you're making a comic here......

Outside the sun was shining. His girlfriend loved him and brought out the craziest kinkiness in him. Half the town loved him, while the other half loved him. Yep. Life was good.

huh???:applejackconfused: I don't get this ending line. Eespecially the half the love of town loved him, while the other half loved him line. Was this a mistake, or are you referring to the fact that it's implying Spike's bisexual meaning that not just mares but stallions wanted to be with him? Personally, I think there is a typo---maybe you meant that half of the town are actually wary of him, but Rarity's half are just like Rarity--smitten and crushing on the dragon.

I really like the progression of this fic:pinkiehappy: it goes from spike dom. To rarity dom. To rarity futa dom while spike is a sissy bitch. It was fantastic :moustache::yay:

4475001 Thank you! :pinkiehappy: I wanted to do something unique, as you don't really see progression like that often in most clopfics. Glad to hear I did it well.

:pinkiegasp: this clopfic... it was actually good! :yay: love this ship! :moustache: :heart: :raritywink:

4503013 you're welcome! :twilightsmile: I just find that a lot of clops aren't good, so when I find a good one, like this one, its AMAZING:pinkiehappy: also, this is my favorite ship :twilightblush: :scootangel:

The formatting makes this story very difficult to read. Might I suggest using more paragraph spacing and horizontal lines for timeskips? It would make it much more appealing to the eyes.

Come on dude, you can't stop now. I wanna find out what happens at that party :twilightblush:

Frankly, I'm a little disappointed no time was spent at the party. Would have really helped set the mood of seeing a bunch of other ponies grind on one another before Rarity pulled Spike off to the side.

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