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Shadowmane PX-41


Just your average british lad. I write things for a living. It’s the strangest living you’ll ever find, second only to my inability to take myself off of the grid.

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This story is a sequel to "Junior" Wonderbolts


Dash just became a foal after recklessly trying to create the Triad Drive for a single pony. Now she's living with her idols, Spitfire, Soarin and Fleetfoot, in a way she'd never expected at all.

But confusion aside, will Dash as a foal make Twilight's new mothering duties a hinderance? Or will she begin to show sympathy for Dash and be OK with whatever the heck Dash pulls out?

Only time will tell, time well spent, we all hope.

The warning has come and gone so many times, that I don't need to be an asshole and keep reminding you it.

Enjoy the story!

P.S: If anyone could make some fanart for this picture, I'll love them forever!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 16 )

OMG!!!! I've been waiting for the sequel forever! And from what I can tell, It's gonna be cute and awesome!:rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy:

yay i also been waiting for the sequel forever and i find it wired that in this sequel the Wondewbolts foals are going to call foal Rainbow Dash they mama

Welcome back shadow... I was thinking about the sequel for this for awhile now... Ill pull together some coverart when I get on my computer next

A nice start to the sequel. I look forward to seeing how this goes:twilightsmile:

Well nice chapter cant wait for more or as foals would say it

Niwce chawpter cawnt wait for mowe

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Actually, thats wayy to many w,s

Only use w's when a w is needed, or to replace an r or an l.

"Nice chaptew cant wait fow mowe."

Would be a more apporpriate foal speak.

4743776 well I tried eh I have more fics to read and maybe wright some more

One word. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

It was a smile that Dash had never seen that smile on Pinkie before

this sentence seemed off. it would have been better as "It was a smile that Dash had never seen on Pinkie before" or "Dash had never seen that smile on Pinkie before"

other than that.... :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

4952175 thank you for notifying me of this.

The Breezies have fixed this typo as I spoke.

I don't have an adult foal fetish, but Celestia damn do I love stories of Twi babying Dashie.

and the shark has bin jumpt :ajbemused: but becas i absolutely loved the original screw it

Let me take a wild guess the milk was meant to erase their memories of being an adult plz reply to this

it’s not a scootaloo story, but I liked it

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