sleep deprivation is nature's eyeshadow.
While searching a lost temple Daring Doo discovered a relic that should have stayed lost. Now it's up to Princess Luna to help save daring from A slumbering doom!
Story was formed from an RP with LuckyBrass13:
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/LuckyBass13
Small warning for: regression(body), diapers, and wetting(light)
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It was good that you had a very easy to catch on to and straight forward plot, but the amounts of spelling and grammar issues was unbearable. I HIGHLY suggest getting an editor, because this was hard to read. Also, it was a bit too long. Half way through the story, I lost intrest. Overall this story would be a 2.5/10 :(
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Thank you for your input.
needs a better ending. Otherwise great story.
7297679 thanks for the input and actually I was thinking of fixing up the end myself.
There were a lot of typos, but I did enjoy this story, kind of wished there was more to it, but oh well