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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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Luna gave me the vision and it led me to the mission I had to accept. There is no choice and no turning back. I don't have to time.

What I am about to do. Then someone is losing his head over what I have to do.

The strange thing is the consequences. Everything always have them. I have to make the clean getaway, but that's merely the first step.

If you ask me, it is Canon, but if you asked Dash, she would merely commit to that it is “20% cooler”.

(Note that this takes place just after the Season finale)

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Perhaps an editor.

4431285 Thanks, that sounds about right.
Problem is that it was hard enough, before the notifications was disabled.

I c ertainly could use some help with a few details, aside from the grammar, that is.
for now, I am brely trying to write the story the best I can.
if the story and premise works, I can work with the grammar along the way.
Sadly, playing it safe with grammar leaves me with no story.

One question that comes to mind, how close should certain details be?
This chapter is purely fiction, to my knowledge, there is noone who tries to stop the show.
On the other hoof, next chapter may come closer to our reality, what then?

Has-Bro would clearly be located in the USA, so a few details may have to correspond with this?

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