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And here we find an American Male, struggling to tide himself over until Season 5 by reading and writing dangerous levels of Fanfiction.

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Newly weds!? :pinkiegasp: But they've been married for years! Did they get re-married or maybe un-divorced!? :pinkiehappy:

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Takes place directly after the events of "A Royal Canterlot Wedding"

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Let an old man have his fun.

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Also, the author edited that in, so it doesn't count anyway. ^.^ (Really though I'm just being silly, don't mind me. :P)

Dat ending...

Love it.

This was a great fic many kudos to you. I love the gender swapped element and the ending made me laugh.

11/10 would read again.

"Here comes the train! Woo woooooooo!" I laughed harder than I should here...

Oh and I had the 69th like, how about that?

Missing line breaks where the story switches from Cadance and Shining Armor to Twilight and back. Otherwise, an interesting story.

4366739 thank you, I don't know how I overlooked that...

But i just finished cloping now i have go clop again oh well:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::ajsmug:

Poor Shining. His brain must still have been broken at the end there.

Shining gasped the flesh of Cadence's

Missing an 'as' in there.

Enjoyed the story.

Love it, but it seems to break off abruptly at the end, like it's unfinished. I'm assuming from the word choice that the last line is probably a comment from Luna, but it ends in a comma, and doesn't really seem like an end to the scene.

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No, it is finished. but that comma makes me read it a different way. Like as if it isn't just a statement. It's looser that. And I figured it would convey an extra sense of flippancy.

And yeah, it is Luna speaking.

There were a few dropped periods and words here and there. I would recommend reading it over again, slowly, and you should catch most of them. Otherwise, excellent work. And it makes an odd sort of sense to me for Cadance (you do consistently spell her name wrong, but so does everypony else), Alicorn of Love, to have gender-swapping magic as part of her talent. Maybe that's just my lack of sleep talking, though.

That was the funniest shit I have ever read
The way he thought he was going to get
Pregnant because if that I mean you have
To be a real mare to have kids!!!!! Right?

If Cadence is going to cast that spell, it will be the end of all of us!!! NOOOO!

Well, that was interesting.

I've seen a clopfic where one of the Mane Six gets rejected by the OC and another where Shining Armor is disgusted by the idea of incest with Twilight. I guess I'm just missing one where Cadance pulls a surprise R63 spell on Shining Armor and it ends on divorce.

But I had way more fun reading this than I should have. :rainbowlaugh:

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