Twilight and Flash have met and it is up to the rest of the mane six for them to admit true love... but things don't go exactly as plan.
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Sorry to say, but your story hosts a whole plethora of grammatical and formatting errors. Please get an editor.
That picture is so cute!
But I'm here to give you a warning: if a story involves Flash Sentry, expect it to get thumbed down. I would know.
I'll put it in my read later list and review then.
This story seems like a great idea. I loved reading it. I just found it had a few loose ends that need to be closed off. Fluttershy, and the big out burst of rarity. Great job though with the alicorn foal. I did enjoy your story.
Ok, look what you said:
A few stallions came by and asked the girls, except Twilight, to a dance.
Do you mean to tell me that Rainbow Dash danced!!!!!!!!!???????
Oh that's just wrong!
4419861 dont you think rainbow deserves a little fun
Dun dun dun!!!! Good story so far.
Wow EPIC BACKFIRE
>> Knack25 then we argee.
harsh
This story is really nice... but did twilight ever find out about fluttershy and flash?
4666799 i ........know
womp
What would a mask do? They are ponies with horns and wings! I still love this
4787241 Throw me a bone man. When I wrote this story, I was a brony for only three months and thought pegasus used magic to activate the weather.
Great stor-...wait wha?..didnt flash have sibs? I mean, hes got matt and winny didnt u say?
Im sorru bat i have to agree with spitflame. U need an editor
Pulling min shit aren't you.
Wow... a 11 year old filly with a broken Heart....who´s says that she´s dead. That´s tooooooo sad for me!! And broken Heart because of Fluttershy!?!?! Wow! You CAN write like a GOD! I LOVE these Stories!
😭
oh very sneaky Fluttershy, but they'll have to cover up their wings and horns
oop!
make up time
le gasp! not rainbow dash!
what the?
Le gasp!