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Ditzy, a well know yet little spoken character finds out the truth of her ancestry. Even with the burden on murder, Ditzy is ready to become the next generation. (Inspired by the fanimation Pony's Creedand is set before Twilight went to Ponyville.)
EDIT: MOST of the story is set before Twilight's Love Story!

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 48 )

This is cool. I shall read it later.

Friendly word of advice, link to said fanimation.

Is Pinkie gonna be an assassin, because Pinkie Pie is my favorite pony & it would be awesome for Pinkie to be an assassin:pinkiehappy: Also, this fanfic is awesome & I will definitely favorite it. When will the next sequence be out because I wont forget to read it.

4416567 I actually have a little surprise for pinkie:derpytongue2: or should I say Pinkamena:pinkiecrazy:!!!

4417366 So what Im getting at is Pinkies a Templar, wait that cant be right, you said Pinkamena? Oh, what my guess is, Pinkie is not a Assassin or Templar, but shes her own villain, Witch references Cupcakes, + if Pinkies her own villain then it can lead to more interesting events, but you're the writer here, & I bet you can come up with something that creates some awesome plot twist that I would love to see. & about my other question, please tell me when the next sequence is gonna come out, I cant wait for it much longer!!!:pinkiecrazy:

4417931 it might be a while before the next story, not too long, but I'm juggling three stories at once.

4419513 Wow!!! that must be alot of pressure. I suggest to take your time & not to rush. I can wait a while, & while im waiting I can start working on my own fanfic. Your fanfic is awesome so far. Keep up the good work!!!:pinkiehappy:

4421952 Thx. Once I finished Twilight's love story, I'll be able t focus on this one, because I don't know if anybrony/Pegasister has notice but in some ways, those two stories are connected... But you didn't here that from me:scootangel:

4424806 your welcome. & I didn't hear that from you:trollestia:. I also have my own fanfic in works, I will release the prologue later today. & I bet sequence 3 of Pony's creed will be epic.

Good story so far, I enjoy it as well as assassins creed

Loving this story so far! :derpytongue2:

I am loving this story so much :pinkiehappy:

I'm sorry to complain but...seriously? Does everypony just know who everypony else is? Is there some kind of newsletter that comes out and says "HEY, this mare's an assassin" and the creed just canceled their subscription?

4500726 well think about it. In AC three, Lee knew who Connor was since fought him for a while... I mean come on, you'd don't think the templars didnt use there powers over the people to make the assassin seem like criminals. JJust to sum it up, if you fight somepony for a while, your going to remember who they are

4500736 ...shut up. You're stopping my angry mood with logic and I don't like it.

Whoa..... PLOT TWIST 720 TWICE AROUND! That's pretty crazy, that ending!

well I have seen everything.:yay:

C-canceled? Why was this cancelled?

4556386 read my blog about my tablet breaking

4573095 Yep, I'm full of twists:derpytongue2:

:flutterrage:moar
btw first

4863668 lol, silly noob, first comments are for fags on YouTube! Your not a fag from YouTube, are you?

4866443 nope just a lurker

4867351 be a lurker, not a fag from YouTube! First comments kinda take the comments section and throw it into the pit of flame... Wars.

4867359 i have started a few instances of flame wars
*sits back and laughes while the comment section burns*
and yes i'm a lurker

4867359 i have started a few flame wars
*sits back and watches the comment section burn*:pinkiecrazy:
and yes i'm a lurker

4867424 yeah, save the flame wars for 4chan. Keep the comments clean!

4867536 i do go on 4chan mainly the /mlp and /b boards

4867655 ..... /b? That disgusting place? That's.... Ok. Well, whatever....

4870465 and i like to chill on XBon

... Well well well, here we go. My only problem is that wasn't Luna the ENTIRE point of their thing? Gee, the Templmares seem sorta useless now.

:twilightangry2: Dam you Gari!!!! :flutterrage:

It's just so all over the place!
And that Gari is just using the eh...temare? as something to achieve power.... they lost their goal...

when can there be a update?:flutterrage::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::twilightoops::twilightangry2::raritystarry::duck::scootangel:

Well it was a food story can't wait for more

Pirates of the Caribbean much?:duck:

So... Did you rerwite the whole sequence or Ctrl+v
By the way I love this story:pinkiehappy:

Noooo! There goes the fourth wall! Drywall is rather expensive you know!:pinkiecrazy:

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