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Skijarama


Voice actor and writer.

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This story is a sequel to Shadow Dancers


Some wounds take time to heal. Some wounds never heal completely. Some heal easier than others. And there are some wounds that just can't heal at all. Luckily for Twilight, she has all but forgotten the wounds that blighted her nightmares for so long. She has healed. However, while it is true that some things are best left alone or forgotten, the darkness that almost took her life was not one of those things. The memories will return, but by then it will be too late to stop the coming darkness. The hands of the black mist reach out, the shadows swirl and writhe, expanding away from the very light that casts them, reaching dangerously for their prey. The deadly dance of shadows began... But it never ended.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 36 )

highly doubting that the sotry could be used so easily. especially cause it would only take luna's intevention if they come back.

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Maybe. But that really all depends on whether or not she even knows whats going on.

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Dear princess luna
a legion of shadow creatures mauled me last night. know what they are?
twilight.

Dear tiwlight sparkle
I have know of creatures that live in shadow but none that are hostile. tell me last you saw the fiends, and i will stand watch. worry not, they likely cannot harm me any more than fire can burn itself.

dear princess luna
i don't know what to do! i think...... i think they went after my friend rainbow dash. she is hurt really, really bad. she's stable but i have no diea if they will come back. please, help us!
Twilight.

though i am slightly intrigued by their nature. do they feed on blood?

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I'd tell you. But really, the more I say, the more you know. The more you know, the less scary or intimidating they are. I want these enemies to be the type of enemy that you never completely figure out. Like the shadow in Amnesia the dark descent. You get some speculation, but no hard facts.

4314164 even the shadow of amnesia had a reason for its actions. it sought to reclaim the orb and hide it away once more. what it was was incomprehensible, but it had purpose if not a clear origin.

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Well, yeah. It's goal was clear. And the Shadow Dancers here will have a clear-cut goal as well. But I can't say what that is. Kind of a big spoiler. :pinkiecrazy:

*fist pumps* yes! cant wait to read man and thanks for notifying me

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No problem. I hope you enjoy.

Wow...didn't know something I suggested, and that you edited for good reason, would turn into something this good...:pinkiesad2:

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I'm surprised I was so inspired by the initial request to keep the story going. For that, I must thank you.

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This is far from over, my friend.

Oh so far...

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This is sooooooo awesome and you have such a way with words :twilightsmile: you are a very talented person and I really hope to see an update soon (no rush though) and I need to find out who these shadow dancers are and what they want so I can personally beat them up for hurting Dash :twilightangry2: lol

Another fabulous chapter :twilightsmile: great job and I love where all if this is going keep up the awesome work :pinkiehappy:

...Wait a minute, something isn't right here...for shadows to exist, there has to be light. So, wouldn't a room filled with light be a very bad idea?

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Yes, but they can only exist in shadows. If you happen to have no shadows, they cant exist in that place. Completely illuminate a room, and the enemy cant get inside.

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Ahhh, gotcha. Thank for clearing that up.

AAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHH I want to know what happens!!!!!

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Well, it might be a while. We shall see.

It has been lots of lots of a while if you ask me. Anyway, I really do not want to be rude or anything, but this story is really interesting. So I just want to know that it will be continue, won't it?

7518656 All things considered, it might. But I don't have any estimates on when it will happen.

you would think this is important enough that twilight would go and meet the other princesses in person

And Nurse RedHaert just gave Rainbow a death wish :ajbemused:

R.I.P Dashie

“I’m afraid not. Some ponies brought her in here just after ten o’clock. They reported that they just found her in the middle of the street, bleeding out and coughing up blood.” Redheart replied, shrugging slightly.

“And you said this was just after eleven?”

Is it eleven or ten?

Is this story going to be continued?
If so when?
And if not then you should probably just put a cancelled tag on it

(Not trying to be rude)

Her eyes widened as she saw shadows spreading rapidly up from her belly, and also up from where her hooves connected with the grass. “What the?!” Dash exclaimed, and flapped her wings hard. But much to her horror, nothing happened. She stayed rooted to the ground. Vulnerable. In the next moment, the shadows covered her entire body, and her vision darkened. She thrashed frantically, about ready to panic as she felt her belly starting to split open, along with her side. It split so easy, as though cut open by a razorblade.

She tried flapping her wings again and again, and every time she was met with no luck. She growled in frustration as she tried to move her legs, only to find that they too were paralyzed. She thrashed again, when suddenly she heard a sickening snap from her back, followed almost instantly by another. Her pupils shrank as a tidal wave of pain flooded her system. Her wings had been snapped.

“HELP ME!” She screamed, unable to move, and completely unable to think straight. The moment her mouth opened, the shadows darted in there too, flowing easily down her throat. It felt as though she had just swallowed burning tar, just without the sticky sensations. The burning in her throat was indescribable, but her voice still came freely. She let out an agonized, terrified scream before she fell silent. The shadows retracted, and let her fall limply to the ground. Rainbow coughed once, a splatter of blood leaving her mouth before the shadows retreated completely, seeming to fade away into the surrounding night time environment.

And that's a nightmare for me. Didn't help that I was reading this at 4:30 a.m
:twilightoops:

This is dark!
You made it so vivid that I can feel my ... never mind that. And I am in a dark room writing this. :twilightoops:

Is this story dead? I hope not...

Dude, can I continue this story? It's a shame it's been cancelled, but I'd like to finish it myself.

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Tell you what: Hit me up in the DMs if your serious about that and I can give you the rundown of what my old plans for this were so you have an outline to go off of.

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I already sent you the DM, let me know if it was sent when you have the opportunity

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