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lunabrony


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Mrs. Cake has just had her foals. Which under normal circumstances, would be cause for celebration. Except for one thing... she was never pregnant.

The Cutie Mark Crusaders have some investigating to do.

And in doing so they may uncover secrets that have been hidden for generations, open a door they'll never be able to close, and find something even more frightening than the HUB logo.

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This reminded me of a good MLP episode, great job on it!:pinkiehappy:

4248524 Oh its just gonna keep getting more intense :D

Got a real good laugh when AJ and Mac refused to answer. Wonder who will end up telling them.

Although one thing I can see happening:

:applecry: Pinkie, where do foals come from?
:pinkiegasp: Why are you asking that?
:scootangel: Because we're trying to figure out where Pound and Pumpkin came from.
:pinkiehappy: That's easy! They came from Mr. and Mrs. Cake!
:unsuresweetie: But...Mrs. Cake wasn't pregnant. Ever. Don't you need to be pregnant to have foals?
:pinkiegasp: ...a mystery!

And then it turns out Cup Cake had a surrogate.

4248687 I love hearing I made people laugh, it makes me feel all fuzzy :D

Lol this was funny! I wonder what will happen if they ask Rarity? Can't wait for more!

"I mean, Mrs. Cake wasn't pregnant. She's never been pregnant and we see her all the time!"
"How can you tell?"

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You put Pumpkin Cake twice. The boy is Pound Cake.

Given Cup Cake's body shape, it's kinda hard to tell if she's pregnant or not.

Still, let's see where this story goes...

Yep, definitely heating up.

The Cake twins are changeling spies!! :pinkiegasp:

Ninja Twilight stole Spike again

Is the entire town Changelings? That seems too obvious. But then how are the normal ponies in on the conspiracy? This situation just keeps getting stranger. :unsuresweetie:

4334297 No. We've only seen two so far.


Nopony in their right mind would do the things in those pictures. That's just wrong."

That was my reaction when I learned were babies come from.

Why're the Changelings even bothering? Out of the entire town, precisely three fillies noticed the spontaneous appearance of two foals. They could just let the adults give them the run around until the CMC gets interested in something else.

Besides, every pony knows that babies are made by Unicorns and delivered by Pegasi. Thats how Rarity's business stays profitable. She makes babies on the side. And those babies are perfectly color coordinated.

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Because the fillies went to Princess Cadance, and she sent the changelings after them. She's the Queen now that Chrysalis got dethroned.

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Both of you calm yourselves, I have this planned out. The beginning of this story is parallel with Baby Cakes, which takes place some time BEFORE the Royal Wedding. In which, you recall, Cadance had appeared to be imprisoned for quite some time...

Also, Maudlin, that's terrible. Absolutely terrible. Shame on you. I will be offended when I stop laughing.

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Aww I wanted super spy eviller than Chrysalis Cadance. :scootangel:

this is cute but at the same time dark an mysterious i cant wait to see where this story leads.

Aw another stop to a good story :applecry:

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