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A little bit of madness goes a long way


In this first installment of All New Daring Do, few ponies get to relieve their childhood fantasies. Daring Do gets that chance, only now she's drawn into the mysterious world of espionage, superheroes, and bad editorial decisions.

Cover Art and Editing by marik_azemus

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 29 )

Nicely written, but I saw a few mistakes at the start. Other the. That you did good my dear writer!

Comment posted by Noble Wings deleted Feb 26th, 2014

May I ask what mistakes? Got to look good after all :pinkiehappy:

...And after 20 years with F.O.A.L.E., Daring will be rewritten as a huge obsidian Crystal Pony stallion... :derpyderp2:

Love the start of this.

Looking forward to this one, indeed.

~Skeeter The Lurker


I don't think more needs to be said.

Under normal circumstances, this would be awful. But intentional badness will always be appreciated. Mwa. :pinkiehappy:

I was surprised with how amused I am by this fix.
14/17 its decent. But the only thing to help it is to develop the story more. So. I will be waiting.
*laughs evilly*

Seems pretty good for a start! I will watch this with cautious enthusiasm.

Three things I though I'd mentioned:

She fumbled around and saw omething on her pillow, glinting in the sunlight that she now realized was mercilessly stabbing her eyes.

Typo here.

“You did at the bar last night.” the unicorn chuckled.

First period should be a comma.

His suit coat gave an air of professionalism.

The prose throughout this first chapter was decent, but this line stuck out to me like a sore thumb; It's by far the most uncomfortably tell-y line in the whole thing. I highly advise re-working it.

Why is it when I look at the cover art, mostly the two mares, I think of U.N.I.T and not S.H.I.E.L.D?

It's a good thing I read so much TV Tropes, else I would be completely lost with this story. It's fascinating, though, and I can't wait to see where you go with it.

I like this so far continue


What TV Tropes have to do with it?

4265751 TV Tropes is my excuse for my more than passing familiarity with comics in general (since I'm not a reader) and SHIELD in particular. I picked up all the references and saw where you were going because I read about them on TV Tropes.

Also, side note: I'm not thrilled with the casual sex angle at the end of the latest chapter, since it feels rather thrown in to me.

they aren’t weren’t

Mistake here.

And I agree with zyr1987 about the casual sex.

Love this so far! Keep up the great work!!:pinkiehappy:

Nor,ally, this would be pretty bad, but since it's intentionally bad, it works like a charm!:rainbowlaugh:

Gotta love the snarky back and forth between Daring and Fleur. Good to know Daring isn't above a night of harmless fun. Deadfoal? Sounds like pony Deadpool. Please:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy: tell me I'm right!

Well, this is getting interesting.

Cherrychongas, of course.

Comment posted by chrysoprox deleted Oct 8th, 2014

All-Star Batman and Robin?!

Nice recreation of Frank Miller's writing style. Needs more repetition repetition repetition.


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