Dear Princess Twilight,
It feels strange writing these words, and even stranger writing what comes next. But I figured it was the least I can do for all you've done for me. Friendship is a tricky thing, and I admit I was kind of jealous you came into it so naturally. Princess Celestia made the right choice, and I can only hope you can get through to me where she failed. Did you ever tell her I was sorry?
I'm rambling, so I'll cut this short. Funny things have been happening since you left again, and it just felt right to report them to you like this. Be prepared for more in the future.
Your Faithful Student,
Sunset Shimmer
Twilight Sparkle returns to Canterlot High once more, only things aren't as they seem. Is Sunset Shimmer just being paranoid, or will everything she holds dear in both worlds be at stake?
Spoilers for the ending of Rainbow Rocks.
Great start, can't wait for it to be continued!
This is great! This is exactly how I see the next movie starting out. Poor Twilight though, she sounds so sad.
Typo:
In your Long Description:
should be
Dear Princess Twilight,
because this is a salutation and the comma goes at the end.
What a good start
This was actually pretty decent. Do go on.
Good start, and I like how you're using Human Twi. You have my attention.
It makes me wonder where her parents are. :P
Well. this seems interesting.
Are you planning on continuing this?