• Member Since 11th Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Jun 12th, 2021

Gypsy Writefag


I mainly write smut and some occasional PG-13 stuff.

T

Canterlot High is full of girls. All kinds of girls, in fact. But there's only one you really want, and with prom coming, you're determined to go with her. At least until complications arrise.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 33 )

Sunset touched you; actually, legitimately touched you. Willingly.

i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/011/877/a_1b1eeebd.jpg

"Yeah", she sighs lightly. "Turns out having transformed into a flying devil with mindcontrolling powers severely limited guys' interest in me. Who'd have thought?"

I would of gone with her... cause I have a prom this year and I'll be on the bench of shame.:fluttercry:

There had better be a Fluttershy reconciliation scene coming up soon...

but she suddenly cuts the modern music and instead puts on something far more old-fashioned.

For some reason these three songs came to mind.

. New, slower music seeps out from the enormous speakers.

Now this song came to mind.

3897811 your a very busy person I've seen you everywhere. And when your there you post like a madman :rainbowlaugh:

3897830 Mainly because I have so much fun voicing my opinions.:scootangel:

"You've got ten seconds to get out of here before I kick your ass."

Bring it on Bitch I am a second degree black belt in Tai-Kwon-Do.:pinkiecrazy:

I Particularly enjoyed this story, mainly because of sunset shimmer maybe I like strong woman I don't know. but one thing is for certain this may deserve a sequel.

NOOO!!!! FLUTTERSHY!! :fluttercry: WHY WOULD I DO THAT!?!?! *Slaps self*

3897856 And yet you misspell it...

3902131 Meh it happens sometimes.:applejackunsure:

Please tell me you intend to add a second chapter to this, if only to resolve the issues with Dash and Fluttershy.
Good read, man. Very groovy.

new chapter new chapter! *chanting

You made 'Shy cry... :fluttercry: NOW YOU MUST DIE! :flutterrage:

:derpytongue2:

That's the problem when A loves B loves C. A is going to get crushed, and everyone blames B. It's also ironic considering the episode that aired just four days after this was posted. :trollestia:

Looks like RD's gonna use Anon's locker as his coffin when she get a hold of her.

I hope there is a sequel planned for this, because I need some satisfaction that Fluttershy is going to be ok and not heatbroken. The ending is left on a cliffhanger of sorts, so I'm taking a guess that there is one in the making/already made I have not heard of yet.

Great concept, a few spelling and grammar errors, but overall a good story. Reeeeeaaaaally hoping for a sequel. Keep up the great work. :raritywink:

I have to admit seeing Fluttershy heartbroken was a bit of a bummer, but I love the story idea. You executed it very well, And I'm glad you didn't say Anon too much. You only used it when truly necessary. In all I really liked this story I'm a sucker for a good romance. You kept it clean, calm, and clop free great job. I really hope you do a sequel, and actually build on this story.

I have to admit, this was pretty awesome. :twilightsmile: I feel bad about Fluttershy though, but the truth had to come out. Is there gonna be a sequel to this?

It's good to see Sunset Shimmer not being a total bitch, although, again, I think there's a lot more story here than you've written down. Ten more chapters please? :fluttershysad:

I really liked the story, but are you going to make a sequel? If so, when will it be ready to read?

I agree with DarkAngel_Neophyte. Would you be willing to do a sequel to this? That is actually not a bad idea.

I would love this to have a romance seqeal. Amazing storey!!!
::heart::heart::heart:

Damn I'm late to the party. Anything new that may or may not come to pass?

1. Continue this story.
2. This could work in the cartoon....minus the language.

Man. This...this did NOT help my ever-mounting anxiety over prom. I'm going to be on the Bench of Shame two years in a row, how about that? At least Anon got a dance out of the whole affair. I won't even get that.

I really liked the story here, it seemed to be something I wouldn't normally read, but I found myself reading through to the end. Very well done, considering my love of Sunset Shimmer.

Waaiiiit, wait, wait.

A (brilliant) one-shot. With an ending like that?

You are evil.

Very nice.

6817257 Literally what first came to mind when I read the title! :rainbowlaugh:

I was reluctant to read this because of it being another Anon story but this was brilliant in spite of it. Well done.

This is clever. I would’ve said genius, but the word’s too strong.

Damn, nothing else. Too good. :ajsmug:

That was a great fanfic but I do wish anon talked with fluttershy because by the end she is just forgotten. He should atleast had a talk with her why he broke it off but still good fanfic

Login or register to comment