• Member Since 11th Aug, 2013
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Gypsy Writefag


I mainly write smut and some occasional PG-13 stuff.

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Inspired by PONIES The Anthology III

There is a mare nobody has ever truly noticed. She stands right in the middle of Ponyville, a never-ending smile on her face. Though everyone has seen her many times, they never remember her. Every day and every night, she watches the citizens and hears their words, yet nobody ever seems to care. This is but one day of thousands in her imprisoned life.

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funny and sad, my a great flavour :twilightsmile:

Just pointing out that 13308 days is only 36 years. https://www.google.com/search?q=13308+days+in+years&rlz=1C1CHFX_enUS492US492&oq=13308+days+in+years&aqs=chrome..69i57j0.11119j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=93&ie=UTF-8

Makes no sense they would say hundreds of years and not remember who she was if it was only 36 years.

Other than that very good story.

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Thanks, mate. For some reason, I thought it was higher. Will fix immediately.

you should totally make an entire story about this mare it would be awesome
she could get released or break out and go on a whole bunch of adventures

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I guess that's a possibility. I'm just not very comfortable with adventure writing. Never really done it before.

that's ok but if you decide to do it I'm sure it'll be awesome :twilightsmile:

Wait, it's over?

Did... Did Celestia come to free Acqua? She didn't, did she?

Argh, I felt claustrophobic just reading thissun'. You did a great job with her character, dude. And, because this story was all about her character, I really enjoyed it.

Two thousand five thousand, four hundred nine days of staring at the same spot... Ugh. At least let me close my eyes before you turn me to stone. Or would that be worse? Ugh. :pinkiesick:

So sad... I do hope that Cakebutt shows some mercy and releases her.

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