BigMacintosh1
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Its good but when you start a paragraph do a five line space and when the characters are talking separate each of their dialogues with three spaces. (it helps the story flow better)
3802954 thank you glad you like it so far I shall keep that in mind as Macintosh slowly dissolves into a heartless soul created by Sombra.
It has potential, but you could use an editor.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
WHAT IS EVERYPONY YELLING ABOUT!!!!
That aside, I liked the story, seemed rushed, but all around enjoyable.
I like your story but you could use and editor, and maybe get rid of the giant spaces that are there.
Other than that I like it so far.
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OK BOTH OF YOH ONE OF YOU TELLS ME TO SPACE IT OUT AND THE OTHER ONE SAYS TOO MUCH SPACE HOW ABOUT I DO IT MY WAY FROM NOW ON OK?!! Is that good does that make y'all happy?!! Huh?!! HUH?!! THINK YOU CAN HANDLE IT CAUSE I CAN CAN YOU?!!! Thank you for liking and enjoying the story!
M/M mac x sombrero (what i call sombra)... i approve
lml that authors note tho
3841086 3840274 i like the giant spaces makes it easyer to read on my phone. (and easyer to stick stuff in X3)
4036843 i.imgur.com/cM6PX.png
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First off not a story of nightmare moon and Sombra ok? Its Big Macintosh and Sombra. Also I know this is inconvenient but this story will not be updated for a long time cause my only reliable computer died for good so I have a computer on order and transferring all my files to it but waiting to get money to actually pay for it so I can write. My phone can only do so much cause its limited screen and not enough time to correct all the wrong autocorrects my phone likes to put in. This is even taking a half hour to type. To be honest with you I have 7 chapters completed for this story to add but the day I wanted to finally put them on here and complete the first story of my life.... Well my computers motherboard gave out and so all my files were stuck on my hard drive and all my school work as well... So yay solid D in college cause my computer died with my final paper! Yay my life sucks.... It sucks terribly... Damn I need to get laid..... But even that sucks cause my boyfriend is grounded for being gay.... Not to mention I can't talk to him on the phone and its my birthday coming up on the 28th so no happy birthday talking to my boyfriend plus he is 17 and all and I'm turning 20 so it makes it worse cause now his promise to come and see me is down the drain cause his parents plus there goes our first date so I'm going to bush gardens by myself again this year with an extra ticket. So maybe my best friend will go with me.... God thing about straight friends who don't mind your gay.... They don't talk about their girlfriends..... They talk about My Little Pony!!!
4666194 sombrero and lulu
4729240 Actually it's Nightmare but whatever!
Can we have a new chapter?
Please?
The cliffhanger is to hard to bear after so long
4770365 since you all want it so bad I shall make the next chapter from what I can remember I wrote. It will be a bit though... I'm having to work for my new computer.
4781801 (shoots back elbow)
Yussss
It's been ffoureen weeks,
I will vanquish this salad
Is this story dead?
5303120 story is not dead work has me so busy and by the time I get some time to myself I choose to spend it with the one I love. The story will be written and my computer hasn't come yet. But when it does everything will be updated. Also when I wrote this story... My heart was broken so the plot was gonna get a lot more devious... But since I am in a deeply committed relationship with someone I love and he loves me... This story might become something more. Unfortunately it will be a bit before I can update so watch carefully sometime. I believe I have a lot of traveling this next week.... So I would keep an eye out... You never know what chapters may appear... Or for all you know... Disappear.
5303167 Don't worry we all got problems, I got a friend who stopped writing altogether because he was depressive so I can understand you got your reasons too.
4667360 Awww man life is hard but it will definitely get sooooo much better