• Member Since 4th Dec, 2012
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BigMacintosh1


I love Vinyldropsthebass!!

Comments ( 18 )

That grammar...oh god, the horror, the horror!

3456658 hey i promise to clean up the grammar but to be honest you be on the side of the road with a popped tire and try to pass the time!!. grammar aint fun and time passing and frankly grammar was not wanted when i wrote it at first but i will clean it up you grammar nazi just for that i will troll and make complete run-ons haha take it take it you grammar nazi hahahaha run-ons!!!!!:eeyup::trixieshiftleft:

Grammer may be bad but i still like the story and well im looking forward to more keep up the good work my friend

3459540
Don't try to brag about horrible grammar. You made the choice to submit this before editing, so you're going to get criticized on that fact. Bragging and saying you're going to troll people with run-on sentences just makes you sound like a moron.

3459717 finally someone gets it!!!! i am a moron!!!!
:pinkiehappy::eeyup:

3459814
An honest moron, at least. That's worth something.

I still enjoy the story and no pony here is a moron

3460735 how did you read that so fast i just posted it?!!!

3460742Didnt read yet i was just sticking up for u

Now i read it and i enjoyed it very much

3460825no prob hey wanna stay in touch u can add me on a website called chatango my account is starstream225

3460829 maybe i do need to get a chatango account though dont i?:derpytongue2:

The concept for the story is good and sounds like it would be a fun one to read but how you went about with it kinda ruins it but with some practice and feedback it could still turnout a grate story

3476003
guess who got a new computer and will be continuing every story!! this guy!!

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