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Erol carstein
Just a guy with time on his hands really, all I can say is a hope you enjoy what I write
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You might as well title this series: Shining Armor Bangs Everyone With A Hole. <__<
*complains about TW and TH not being updated* Went back and reread TW. Still love that story.
Also, this needs more editing. Most of the mistakes were in the first chapter, but there were a number in the second.
Of course YOU would write this to satisfy you hrony desires
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Jesus man, I just wrote a story, calm down.
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Is luna still nightmare moon?
Becuase when they mentioned "elements" that means luna shoud have gotten something
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I don't see how that works.
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First of all I'm not complaing, I like your stories a lot
So take my first comment as a compliment if you will
Second I just want I know
Is Celestia the sole ruler in this universe or does luna rule alongside her as an equal
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My apologies, I feel really bad now
Yes, Luna is in this universe, and she is seperated from Nightmare Moon.
Her time will come...
Hmm looks interesting will read when my dog isn't sleeping on my chest.
I like it a lot please update
Read it. Now the story was a little slow but very well written. Far and beyond most fics. You have also grasped the concept that detail is in fact important to a story. Well done. I look forward to more.
Bunch of odd or missing grammar floating around in this fic, but the concept is real neat as is the evolution of the story.
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!
The story flows so well, the vocabulary is wide ranged, the characters are convinving, the background is full of possibilities and generally: beautiful!
Unfortunately, I have to give a word about the grammatical mistakes too, namely, the complete lack of the quotation marks, for example, you wrote *mares* instead of *mare's*.
Nevertheless, this story won my whole interest, please continue and create more!
Oh, and a biiig plus at the Faust swearings, oh I love it when someone acknowledges it.
-Zeph
Oh my Luna! You actually did it! You made Fembar! YESSSS!
Does anybody else think that all of... this, might just be Celestia's way of punishing Shining Armor for making her feel attracted to him?
Damn, way to leave me begging for more. This is my first experience finding a skilled, and convincing depiction of female sombra. Good work, please continue.
4712159 Though I would suggest a pre reader to catch all those minor grammatical errors that interrupt the flow of reading the chapter, very well done.
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*Except his wife.
That's what bugs me about this series. Like, Shining needs to nut the fuck up and tell Celestia to fuck off. Does he love his wife? Because, I mean, wasn't that the entire point of A Canterlot Wedding? That their love was so pure and strong it can overcome anything? I know, his memory is wiped, but cut the poor guy a break!
Don't misunderstand, it's a good series, and incredibly erotic, but I'm just a pathetic wimp who likes the idea of "true love," so all this playing around irks me.
Okay, so it's a given that these two are gonna bone, like... hard, but I really hope Shining puts this smug bitch in her place. SO far he's been the simpering submissive in these encounters. While the stubborn romantic in me agrees with my above post concerning Shining and his love for his wife, the soldier in me is chomping at the bit to see Shining show Umbra the true might of the Solar Guard. So, regardless of the fucking, Shining needs to kick the Queen's ass.
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I can't exactly tell you how it's going to pan out, for the sake of spoilers, but just rest assured that the issue will be addressed at some point in the future.
Shining Armor, should win... I mean if that land's rules are like that, there would be no negotiation if she wins seeing the "Southerners" weak.
And I would like to finally see Shining on top.
but anyway, a VERY Appreciated idea and Umbra being used. I can't wait for Eris... and maybe the Countess even? Tirek's r63
Frankly, I'm a little disappointed that this is R63 Sombra. What's the point? Aren't there enough female characters for Shining to bang? Call me a stupid fag, but I think it's kind of ridiculous to reverse the sex of one of the few male characters there are in order to make this hetero.
Don't get me wrong, I'm still going to read this, and I'm probably still going to love it just like the others. It's just an annoyance that came to me immediately upon seeing this.
How many times can this happen without Cadence noticing? What's next? The ruler of the Griffin?
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Maybe
Kinda reminds me of Cadia from W40k
Your interpretation of Queen Umbra strongly reminds of Queen Mab from the Dresden Files. Very nicely done.
4710734 And apparently chrysalis actually considers him her husband too...
Very interesting.
fillies Gentelcoltes,
-Chik chik-
See you in hell.
It's a good story so far
I'd approve even more, but I'm missing more chapters! I need to infuse you with inspiration somehow. *throws piles of bits at you*
4744081 Yeah but that is not stopping her from fucking other guys though is it. How sad a life she must have
Hmmmm...
I approve.
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Wow, you are right! (Love that series btw)
This is written quite well, and I like the dialogue so far. This is on my watch list for more.
Have a green thumb!
I was hoping Cloptober was going to be the one, but apparently it was not!
Better luck next month!
The evil.
Well sorry shining but now you are stuck in an infinite loop until Umbra finally beats you, or when her lusts are sated.
Wonder how long that will take...
He stuck. One last mare to go. Celestia herself
I fucking support this! !!
Support Shining Armor boning the Royals and the powerful!
He's also stuck in a political shit storm... considering his choices, Stay with the Queen!
Oh man, so many people brainwashing Shining, hope there's no permanent damage :(
Just a quick question, why has terminal world been password locked? Or is it gone?
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I hope in future installment of this series we get to see Shinning Armor with:
Eris the r63 version of discord:
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and the r63 version of Tirek:
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For the unedited version of the first pic try reverse search image the pic in images google or on Derpibooru you will find the uncrop version. And to find another pic where the R63 Tirek is draining magic though sexual acts you can try looking up the artist who calls by the name "cold blooded twilight" you will find it.
And is Shinning Armor gonna have a harem full of villainesses (including Nightmare Moon) by the time this series is done?
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Its look like Shinning Armor was getting drugged the whole time so Umbra can repeat that day over and over I guess Umbra must like “Getting put back in her in place” a lot. Shinning's sense of time is going be mess once he get back to his nations and realize he was gone for a week.
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Its look like Shinning Armor was getting drugged the whole time so Umbra can repeat that day over and over I guess Umbra must like “Getting put back in her in place” a lot. Shinning's sense of time is going be mess once he get back to his nations and realize he was gone for a week.
5356840 I'm not sure where you got that it just looks like she drugged him to avoid the problem with the wife for that one time.
So, he's going to remember all the memories that were wiped from his mind? If that is true, oh-hoho, Celestia you've fucked up now. (please be it, because I'm sympathetic with the Armor of this story now and well... I want him to have a happy ending. Also, this Celestia deserves to be betrayed.)
5933187 She deserves a happy ending, actually. From Shining Armor!
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Celestia doesn't, she's manipulated and used him. I personally don't see revenge as a good option, but she needs to face the consequences of her actions.
5992392 She agonized over it every time, and it hurts her a lot every time she does it. Because she really wants to be the one to be with him, after all.
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But she must face the consequences of her actions, her agonizing is not enough to bring justice. If Shining knew what she had done to him he would be an anxious and hallow wreck of a pony. That feeling of betrayal he has for his wife, that would be tripled. That would be only for a short time for anger and hatred will fill him and he'll do the one thing I pray he does. Run away, never to be heard from again and some worthy noble brings Celestia's crimes to light. She must be punished, someone willing to use their own friends to gain political power like that sickens me.
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Mad King Sombra? Decent title, but not as impressive as his full title.
King Sombra, Black Tyrant King of the Crystal Empire and Lord of Dark Magic.
(Salutes) go get him buddy.
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how about princess Ember, Tempest or Maniac?