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Final Draft


All the world is indeed a stage, and we are merely players, performers, and portrayers; each anothers audience outside the gilded cage.

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an interesting concept up to now, wonder where you'll be going next with this...:pinkiesmile:

It's always seemed to me that dentists rank just behind physical therapists in terms of latent (sometimes blatant) sadism, so this is perhaps a little more believable than it ought to be. Good show.

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I have added more to part one, rather than making part two. Possibly a bad choice on my part, but where only you two and five others have actually read it, it isn't a big deal.

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You weren't kidding about "more graphic." You haven't scared me off, though. (Yet.)

This reminds me of a Gahan Wilson cartoon where a hospital patient sees a doctor with fungus for a head and the nurse turning into a monster horse.
The doctor says, "There may be some side effects to those pills you took."
I'm paraphrasing as it's been years since I've seen that comic.
This reminds me of the time I had some wisdom teeth taken out. Laughing gas was administered and soon I went on the weirdest drug trip of my life.
Everybody sounded like cartoon mice for what seemed like hours.
I'll be keeping an eye on this. I like the premise, so keep it up, please. Upvote from me.

Nice. Poor Apple Bloom, she's gonna be scarred for life :applecry:

The only thing that was wrong with this chapter was that AJ's name is spelled "Applejack", not "Apple Jack".

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Thank you, I shall fix that asap

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What. It's supposed to be Applejack.

EDIT: Ohhhh, okay. Thought you were saying it was the other way around.

Good fic, author. Primo job, I want the next chapters ASAP.

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Hoooooly BALLS!

Ouch... soon Scootaloo's gonna have a flight of her life... :rainbowderp:

I predict the Doctor will soon have her world redefined in terms of pain.

Is scootalw having braces or somthing like head gear I like the idea later on rainbow I cant believe you:rainbowderp:

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