It's not everyday that the Dragonborn goes out and about. O' course, last time he did he dropped by my home. Literally. A dragon knocked him from the mountain and he crashed through the roof an onto the bed. He killed the dragon, and gave me about 1,000 septims for ruining my house.
The Dragonborn? Yeah, I've seen him. He's an odd fellow, but a... giddy one. He's easily excitable, can carry a burden or two, and he's a fine worker and warrior. The only problem? He always comes back either unscathed or near-dead. Always patched him up for what it was worth though.
The last time I saw the Dragonborn was around Morthal. Yeah, he took up Benor and after a good fight, he decided to tag along with him. It's not everyday you see a man in all types of Dwarfish, Orkish, and Elven armor running around killing dragons... Although, I wonder what happened to the Dragonborn fellow? What I heard is that he up and disappeared one night, no hair nor hide of him. The only thing we found was a small note saying that someone needed him in a far off land. The only place I can think of is Elsweyr, but then again, maybe it's not that far away.
I liyk it
hahaha a mixture of comedy and high adventure perhaps? I like it.
3723495 I got the Idea of the Lusty Argonian Maid thing because, well it's popular.
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This is relevant to my interests. I will await more. by which I mean MOAR!
Please continue.
LEVEL 13?... Lucky I was like six-ish when one popped up, it was painful.
3747741 I'm Level 47 now. Still don't mean that Dragon Priests are pains in the ass
Wat
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3769391 wat?
3769671 I'm confused.
3769805 How?
3769824 One moment, he's having a friendly chat with Anthrolestia, the other moment Luna blasts in with the stereotypical dramatic entry with the royal canterlock, then he dragon shouts before his Fus Ro Dah CD'S up, and Anthrolestia or Lunatic dosen't even act surprised?
3769901 Okay, okay, okay, okay....
First off: It's a story, and if you don't like it, why are here complaining about it.
Second: It's a story, just because something in the story is not the same way in the game doesn't make it bad. Sometimes to most of the time, it's rather a good thing.
Third: When you shout in the game and you're inside of a cave, everyone around a certain area hears you. This is the same case.
3769906 "Why are you here complaining about it" Well, it's not complaining as much as it's confusion.
3769907 The way it came off to me was complaining... very easy to get the two mixed up.
The reason why the don't act surprised is because of Kyne's Peace. Kaan Drem Ov, translates as: "Kyne Peace Trust". I merely took advantage of the Trust part. And it was not a friendly conversion. While he pulled up a chair, the Guards themselves acted in Celestia's defense and huddled around her. When he gestured her to sit and spoke in Dov, she was still standing and confused as well.
You can't look at a bowl of pea soup and say "Where are the peas?" You need to think these things through, start assuming what's happening. I do it all the time in stories, like when they foreshadow a character, I already know who it was before the said their name.
3769916 My head is hurting D:
3769917 Don't you're over thinking.
3769923 Dat sentence build :&
3769925 Read it, I dare you then you'll understand.
3769932 There's multiple builds for said sentence, the original were: "Don't you're over thinking." Which means "Do not you are over thinking."
There are multiple ways to correct this, "Don't, you're over thinking it." Being one of them, or.
"Don't, you're over thinking?"
Or perhaps just "Don't, you're over thinking it."
Very small things have a large impact.
3769936 Are... you seriously doing that? Please don't be that guy...
3769947
Surprise, I didn't understand.
"Flies away as the duck she is."
3769947 We all have seen...that person one time or another.
Get someone to fix up your simple grammar mistakes for you.
That took a while
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I waited this long for that?
As long as the next one comes out faster than this,I'll be fine.
179 words? Even I have standards...
3880819 3881459 Hey! You want backstory, or do you want to complain, because if you want to complain, then leave.
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Ask anyone really, no one wants to wait a week just to receive two hundred words, not enough to fill a half A4 paper.
We complain because WE. WANT. TO. HELP. YOU. Y'know? here's some very basic rules with writing a story, very much so a crossover.
1: Don't have the ponies / anthro (whatevs.) Be very forgiving very fast, makes the story boring and useless to read, kind of like ordering a Large chocolate milkshake and getting a small banana milkshake.
2. Do not ever under any circumstances post a chapter under 500 words unless it's something along the lines of "FYI I'm going on hiatus for a month b'cuz I caught the flue, not really feeling up for writing." or you just want to make some witty jokes, or perhaps a small bonus chapter, the thing with Backstory chapter's that they should be from one thousand five hundred (1,500) to four thousand (4,000) words long, just to paint a accurate picture, even if it means that you have to spend a month to get said chapter out, it's better than 170 words.
3. For the love of god Grammar, grammar spelling and phasing seems to be your... Breaching points, you phase the story too quickly, what should've taken two chapter's take a half, it looks like you actually used hoofs when writing this then just right-click google spellcheck fixed it.
Yeah that's pretty much it for the basic rules, writing a story is very dangerous territory, it's like encountering a Giant on level five.
3882506 Look, I'm a little pissy today, I've literally nothing productive all day, and to top it off my feet are sore from being on them since 9:00 in the morning. I understand you're trying to help and I'm thankful for that. It's just I have family problems, personal problems, school (problems not withstanding), and a lot of other stuff. Like preparing to fix up an entire house. I don't mean to sound angry, nor defensive, I'm just pissy.
3882528 You're talking to someone who's grandmother died less than a month ago, two of my favorite pet's are dead because they caught some kind of flue, my cousins wife is on her deathbed with a lung infection and inflammation, the past two or so years my entire world's been in a turmoil, so yeah, I know how it feels, I picked up self defense lessons to let out pent up stress and anger.
3882547 Look. I'm sorry alright. Progress is slow to the spawn, and not a lot of good things come out of it. Like the only comment from you that I deleted was about correcting a comment I made. That...
I mean come on... But I can understand what you're going through. And like I said, progress is slow due to the fact that I don't write down my chapters, I just make it up as I go along. It's worked in most cases... and in others I wish not to recall upon, but that's my way doing it and I'm sticking with it.
3882569 Same as me then, when I write I just make things up as I go along, I don't plan much on a story other than the ending, of which will probably be sad.
3882571 Ah, that's were we split then, I made a few sad tales, two, to be precise. One of which has left people speechless, while the other made most cringe in fear and one comment (out of five) said to make a sequel for it. I was never good at making a first person view point, nor anything outside of a crossover, so when those two gave way and let a flood of good in, I had a new vigor. And now I'm currently working on another story right now, "I Didn't Say Yes, But I Didn't Say No".
3882586 The best way to end a story, satisfying the reader and ending the story itself by killing of a emotional character, is if their sacrifice was worthwhile, so that it feels like even though they may be dead, they'll still live on with us.
3882441
Whigga chill
I aint mad at you, I'm just sayin that the time gap between this chapter and the last was long enough for more.
I don't care how long it is as long as there's explanation and plot twists.
Good luck with the rest though, and holy shit do I need to go to sleep.
3882441
Wow do I feel like a dusch.
I didn't realize how much I've been complaining lately.
Thanks for calling me out on it.
Lydia? NO! you were never sworn to protect him, you were sworn to carry his burdens... HIS BURDENS!
You know no mater how many times I play skyrim I just think of that song over and over when I coleckt ore