"Where are we?"
"I don't know... wait a minute! You're talking! So am I!"
The hooded pony quickly made way to a small pond that was in-front of them.
"S-S-Smoker! You might want to take a look at this..."
NOTE: If you are from the UK I'm sorry if the picture offends you in any way.
New unofficial theme for this fic right here.
Nice intro. Looking forward to the next chapter.
It's ok. It could definitely use some work, but it's good overall. Now go make moar! I need my Left 4 Dead/Pony fix.
Well, this is interesting. I want to see more. Please?
Nice. Gonna keep an eye on this one!
I found some cover art!
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Chapter three is up, but it wont show on that I updated it... weird
I'm torn on how to feel. On one hand, I don't understand why the zombies are being so... Nice. (I'm still scarred by my first Witch encounter on L4D2) but at the same time they are enjoyable characters, (espically Witch) that I don't care.
Honestly, this story made me laugh, but also just made me at points. It's a fun story, if a bit.... Stupid at times.
No offense, I really like it, but there are just something's I don't understand.
2032618 You'll know why in future chapters...
hunter is best specialfc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/159/5/6/mlp__l4d_hunter_by_stephaniescarlet-d52pvpm.jpg
Awesome shit man. This is a good read
2035384 and charger is best infected
"You hear tha-"
*SMACK*
AAAAaaaaa *crash*
ok
this fanfic is not only diffident but now also has the infected being the main focus is interesting.
i also see Hunter and Rainbow Dash shipping now
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Can't wait for more!
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That picture be LTS right?
2043274>>2043274. Ya he made this face when he was in a group photo
Got a question here. Spitter still has her acid spit which probably means the smoker still has his tounge or some kind of spell that works the same way.
Does boomer still have his puke? And what the hell would it do now? Attract manticores?
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Now you see, Spitter yes still has her acid spit. But, unlike in New Orleans (For Reference) all she has to do is not talk alot. Try talking non stop, you'll drool. Boomer can't explode, but yes he can still puke. What it attracts? you'll see....
Smoker yes still has his tongue, but he doesn't want to use it for the reason it's made for hurting, not helping.
2059833 not to mention grotesque. seriously, I always thought that the tounge thing was just... Ugh.
But if used on a person about to fall off a cliff it can help.
i'm not sure why but,
this seems familiar...
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Hmm...Almost... No Screamer and some other things are mixed up...
Spitter doesn't have her face completely dissolved off, Witch is a pegasus instead of an Earth Pony (If I remember correctly) and Tank is not pink. He is Tannish-brown...
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ah well, seems good.
...you thought i had spelling errors? double check yours. anyways, not bad
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My computer has built in Spell Check... I know when I spell something wrong
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hrm... maybe i'm just tired. anyway, carry on.
(p.s. witch is a pegasus in mine, just hasn't gotten a chance to fly yet.)
but, seems interesting.
continue.
out load or out loud?
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Fixed :3
Alright, Tank is the best infected. I can't wait to see how Twilight will react to these guy's story.
I'm glad you're still updating. This is a really enjoyable story.
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Already thinking up Chapter Five
Barricade Your Homes
I want them to use their infected abilities! That would be awesome. Hunter pouncing on top of buildings to get to places quickly, Smoker using his tongue to probably get to high places that sort of thing.
2062173 Don't you worry that pretty little head of yours Billy...
Question, how does Twilight immediately suspect that they're from a different world. Could be that their lived in a place where there were no unicorns.
2067570 If you read the story AT ALL you would see that they all have something from their previous form. Charger even though his large arm is on the left instead of right, is still huge and bulky. Tank speaks for himself. Witch still has her claws, just in the aspect of her wings. Smoker you'll find out, and Boomer like I said you'll find out. It's all about patience and understanding
2067570 Plus Smoker IS a unicorn and didn't know about magic
Story time!
*Grabs popcorn*
Can't wait to see how they're going to explain that they are diseased creatures from another world that literally caused the death of millions.
I think it will go over well.
huh, it appears that your version of the infected are a little more trusting that mine.
anyway, for some strange reason it didn't say this updated yesterday...
2075691 It happen-
Wait... We found a bug... We FouND A BUG!!! Quick! Send it Knighty!
Jockeys inevitable encounter will no doubt be interesting
And, if pinkie is any good at reading smiles, it will be heart-wrenching
the jakeh
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I agree with that.
C'MON PEOPLE! WE NEED THIS FEATURED!
Dude, I love what you are writing but please, by the love of the chaos gods, write longer chapters.
I swear, the teasing is killing me. I don't mind longer intervals between chapters but his is driving me insane with a want for more
2085439 Sorry, I only have a strict about 1000-2000 words.
NOTE: 2000+ is extremely rare
2085444 fine, not like I'm entitled to make demands on your story. Sorry, just felt like saying it.
Still, the point of me wanting to read the next chapter to the point of insanity is only positive critic towards you
tank has Russian accent doe's he not?
2085521 No he does not.
He has a...something I dont know yet
..... You're trying to make me love Witch aren't you?
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Oh am I? Why, I haven't noticed.
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adorable witch
does not compute
also, Witch sleeping on Tank's back is now official left 4 dead canon
Witch + Fluttershy = besties