Equestria. Yep. And its fun at first, because there are lots of new thingies to kill, and new shiny stuff to steal. But then, as Grimskull and his ladz venture out of the Everfree Forest, and deeper into Equestria, they must deal with new... squig-fings who talk, and don't even know his species, let alone name. The boyz must keep firm. This "Frendship" that the squig-fings talk about is a load of rubbish. All Grimskull wants is to kill stuff and steal its shiny things. And they all need to make it off this planet sane (by Ork standards, anyway).
That would require some good pilots and mechanics.
Unfortunately, the only things around that can offer these are the very squig-things he hates...
Chapters (1)
Waaaaaagh!
Not quite...
yeah equestria is fucked... even if they kill all da boyz more will spawn because of the spores they carry.
Hmm... not bad, but feels a bit rushed...
2413233 They won't kill da boyz, unless Equestria's real name is Graia....
Roight den, 'nuff mukin' around!
WAAAAAAGH!!!
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even if da boys didn't die. even they did find peace, the planet would just die from over population.
thats y da boys evolved to fight. to look for waaaaagh! so they can sustain their species. if they don't fight they all die of peace as more and more boyz spawn.
2413274 well, we know that at least Grimskull gets off Equestria... unless you haven't played Space Marine yet, then forget I said anything
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that was the same grimskull?
2413437 I think so; it is his picture on the fic
Wow, this is one of those stories which I can't wait more for, you gladly earn a like.
AWESOME!
-_- Dammit Celestia.... just... just...
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I think she's going to find out real quick that:
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Looking forward for this fic, Will read it later seems quite funny, I WANT TO READ IT NOW
Orks in Equestria? This can only end well.
Da frakk? This story... dear sweet Celestia... I'm following the hell out of this.
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Yeah, sorry...
Only just occurred to me to write up a storyboard. It's really helping the next chapter pace itself, and not feel quite so, suddenly this happened. Then this. Oh, and in the meantime, this happened.
This is your first? It certainly shows. This first chapter isn't really that impressive, and it jumps from thing to thing far too quickly and far too often. Mostly it's just. . . I can't think of the word for it. But it's not spaced out enough. And a lot of the dialog feels forced. I hope it gets better in future chapters.
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Yes, like I said, I've finished a storyboard, but don't know if it'll be enough to even out the pacing or, indeed, keep the characters in character. I do intend to put the CMCs in somewhere later, they have their slot in the plot-line.
WAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!
2419372 This is a great story, hope to see it updated soon
And they underestimated the orks. :-/ And Ponyville is in ruins...again. X-/
I wonder if he'll steal the a hat again.
This song.
crazy orks glad I'm a Kroot
Is this going to update? I am going to be honest, Grimskull is my Favorite Warboss, so I want to see him destroy Canterlot and beyond.
This is dead. Feel free to adopt it.