After a freak Geller Field accident, Ursarkar E. Creed wakes up in Equestra. He soon finds himself in a battle of wits with Discord, while trying to adjust to the strange, candy-colored world he appeared in.
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576-Belligerent-Coil
Just a normal college kid... and a brony... who likes to write. Not a lot, but it's there.
576-Belligerent-Coil
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You know, it's not that o- wait, where did that Baneblade come from?!
CREEEEEEEEEEEEED!
I went to the therapist once.
She turned out to be a Leman Russ Tank.
CREEEEEEEED!
Needs moar Baneblades
...There are no goddamn words...
But really, this piece was meaningless. It was just the mindless repetition of a meme, with all the ponies in character because they only needed to show the one most obvious character trait each of them had.
That is not to say it was bad. It was fairly well written, and it's just depressing how many people can't get even single incredibly obvious character traits right. I just think there was no good reason to write this. No thumbs, either direction. I do hope you try writing something else- again, it's just depressing how badly some people write. At least you seem to have a decent grasp on grammar and spelling.
So- no thumbs this time, please try again. No, at no point was that last sentence sarcastic.
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Whoring myself out, wanna try mine? Named Abandoned Hopes, it has some good reviews.
Some people need to lighten up, seriously. Fine art it was not, and yeah it was basically a riff on a meme, but who cares it amused me for a few minutes and the writing didn't make my eyes bleed which is all I really ask from humor.
Creed.
you are one EPIC mo-fo, bro!
Ahem
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Creed: the argument-invalidating tactical genius that gives Leman Russes- and anything else- the ability to just PLOP in wherever you want it. Because he's just cool like that.
fimfiction.net/images/story_images/14479.png You inspired me to write a crossover thank you and emperor protects!
446885 You dear sir, have found me my new desktop image! For some reason, I am reminded of the Ciaphas Cain series, with Twilight being Cain and Spike being Jurgen.
Overall a pretty funny story to me.
446989 Fear me, but follow! I mean watch, I got a mlp warhammer crossover in the mix now.
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If such is the Emperor's wills.
And don't worry, I will watch with the blessings of the Inquisition.
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Aw, damn. You caught me.
I wrote this on a whim after talking to my roommate over dinner about who would win between Creed and Discord. It is pretty pointless, but as long as it gets a laugh or two, izzall good.
And don't worry, man. I'm currently writing another, non-crossover fic with a lot less cheese and a more relevant story.
Cheers for that, wish me luck, etc.
--576-Belligerent-Coil was here
EDIT: To everyone else, thanks for the feedback. And >>Kotushk, gimme a few days to get around to reading your fic. Got a lot on my plate, but it sounds interesting.
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Well, I'll be sure to give that a try when you publish it, since you don't seem to be a bad writer. So I'll agree with the last bit- good luck on your next story, hope to see it soon.
Also, 446325- yeah, checking it out now. Few chapters in so far. Interesting. I'll read a bit further in before I start really commenting, though.
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OK
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Your wish is my command. The story is published and approved. Be sure to check it out at your leisure.
...mind you, it's only the first of three parts, so yeah. More will be up as I finish it.
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So, for a little bit more shameless advertising, anyone else who liked this story, check out my next one here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/21153/End-of-Courage
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I am the roommate he spoke of and it was a very funny dinner to say the least.
creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
implying going to equestria was not just as planned. Creed doesn't get surprised you silly fool. Although he does at times consort with xeBLAM HERASY
I can imagine celestia looking up at the ship as it leaves thinking "And I never got to play poker with him.. Damn"
6218387 I was dumb enough to play a game with him. He's actually rather terrible but the deck always turns out to be a carefully arranged pile of Leman Russ Vanquishers.
7182042 Creed isnt a man. He is a force of nature. Order in the guise of "pulled from my butt"ness. Not even gork n mork would play checkers with him. ''es a cheatin git!" "A roight NASTY cheatin git!" "DATS OUR JOB!" "Yeah where 'e get off crumping our style? "
7186103 Well that explains how some bleachers turned into a Baneblade when we got the approval to watch some Sororitas mud wrestle. Or that one time he lured some chaos warbands onto a seemingly perfect copy of Cadia that was in fact a carefully positioned Titan Legio.
CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED!