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TheExhaustedBrony


I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.

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During her return to Ponyville, Twilight decided to tinker with a machine that she had started years before her coronation, but forgot about. She spent a month working on it and when it was finally finished, she asked her friends to help her test the machine assuring them that it will bring them all closer together, much, much closer.

Temporary cover is being used. Episode was released? Alrighty then!

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Comments ( 22 )

Ok... this looks like it will be a bit weird...
*commences to read*

It's out!

I was not entertained, I find the premise less satisfying than what I thought the premise would be, and I didn't find the story to be interesting.

3551562 Thank you for the feedback, it's appreciated.

3551566 AH!

That was fast!:twilightoops:

3551571 Your response to my comment, it was barely over half a minute.

3551627 Well, whenever I post a new story, I am constantly going between the front page, my page, my notifications, and the story that was posted.

One of the things that I enjoy in stories is just not plot. (Though Plot is a big thing to me, I am still flexible in my expectations.) I did not find much plot, but that is irrelevant to my enjoyment in this feast.

I like bizarre ideas, Ideas that can make a person think even to the slightest degree. Though I had to push myself to finish the last few words, I enjoyed every moment of it.

For me was it a high quality read..... No, but that is ok. I don't think it was meant to be high quality based on your AN comment.

I for one am glad to have come acrossed this and to have a new idea run by me.:pinkiesmile:

~Make life an Adventure~
Mr. Flare:moustache:

What a strange, yet interesting idea.

The cover art is from S4E3 aka 'Castle-mania', might want to change that since it hasn't officially aired yet

Comment posted by speedy05 deleted Nov 28th, 2013

I agree with shyguy. It's from a leak.


What about this image for the cover art? derpicdn.net/img/view/2012/8/19/78094.png

3551729 I took your advice and changed the cover for now.

It's Discord's bride! I love the nickname "Purple Smart". Please don't make this story an "It was all a dream" shtick, please. Cheerful silliness
all around.

I.... um..... my.... my brain can't even...... what the heck kinda machine was that?! a transmutation? What even?!? And why did she drag her friends into it :rainbowlaugh: my brain....... I have a headache now.........

what happen next chapter?

More chapters please

More chapters please

The alicorn turned her head to see that all of her friends were now attached to her body, at least their heads were.

I know that twilight usually has a good head on her shoulders, but-

[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=I0e7V2hzqI0]

Just couldn't wait for me to finish, huh? :facehoof:

That was pretty good :rainbowlaugh:
The personalities where spot on :pinkiesmile:

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