• Published 17th Nov 2013
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Cute Cutie Mark Crusaders (CCMC) - Night--Mist



This is what happens when you scare you sisters and older friends to death.

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Princess Trixie Sparkle Story, and an Apple Get Together

It had been about a week since Twilight and her friends had considered to have the whole town of Ponyville mind wiped, but Celestia had soon sent notice that even though she could perform the spell, it would only be done to the pony who requested it, much like Twilight had done for her new daughter. She had also revealed that she had looked into the archives of Trixie's ancestry and found that Trixie's family had unfortunately passed away after a brutal attack by rogue Griffons. The Griffons had been dealt with by their king and queen, but this had shaken Celetia's trust in them a bit, when she had looked into this.

Celestia and Luna had then a brilliant idea. And two days later it was announced to the public by them, Cadence and Twilight, that Trixie was to be adopted into the royal Alicorn family. Twilight had explained that Trixie had tried to perform a spell that was beyond her skill level, trying to equal Twilight in her abilities so that she might get noticed by the Princesses and be enrolled in school. It was thanks to Discord that the Princesses were informed that Tixie had released a huge amount of her own magic almost equivalent to Twilight's. By the time they arrived to Trixie's location, which had been in a library near the castle with books equivalent to the castle's library itself, they came upon a little foal version of Trixie.

Luna then explained that she used her powers to search Trixie's memories, and she assured everypony she only performed this when ponies were in need of her or her sister's guidance. Watching over ponies dreams was a particular way she usually performed this, much like she had done for Scootaloo and Sweeite Belle in the past. Getting back on the subject of Trixie, when she had entered into Trixie's memory, there was nothing but a blank slate. Trixie had not only regressed herself into a foal by accident, but she had also wiped her own memories, short and long term completely clean, so she had no recollection of what she had done on her life or who she knew.

Celestia then told the kingdom that she, Cadence, Luna and Twilight, along with Twilight's friends, aside from Pinkie Pie, had looked through Trixie's family history and that's when they found the bit of information that had revealed her family's fate. The Alicorn princesses could not bare the thought of putting her in an orphanage after reading about this, and also due to the fact Trixie had soon saw Twilight as her mother it was settled.

Twilight couldn't say no to mothering such a cute little face. The Princesses then came to an agreement and decided that they would all take part in adopting the little unicorn. When this had been announced, of course, all the snob nobles were in an uproar. Blueblood ranted that there was no way he would want to be related to a pony of common blood, and other nobles had claimed that the Princesses were not allowed to do this. This however was cleared up when Lord Fancy Pants had revealed that no law ever stated that the Royal Alicorn Family was unable to adopt children, be they of noble decent or not to begin with. He also found it to be rather, well, noble of the Alicorn Family to help a pony in this way, with the past she had, granted, she no longer had a recollection of it. This soon shut many nobles up as the rest of the middle class ponies and below had agreed with him.

So, it was settled that Twilght would be Trixie's new mother. Celestia, Luna and Cadence took on the role of royal aunts, and after much persuasion, Blue Blood agreed to accept her as his cousin, and even was humble enough to address Twilight as his aunt, even though she was relatively his age, if not younger, which meant Shining Armor was his uncle. Shining Armor was glad he got a niece, and was also a tad jealous as well, seeing as he and Cadence had not yet even talked about having a foal together. Velvet Sparkle and Night Light were ecstatic that they now had a grandchild to spoil rotten. Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Rarity, as well as Pinkie Pie when she found out, had also decided that they would become her adopted aunts. This mean that the Ponyville CMC were not only friends with Trixie. They were also her cousins.

All though it was a lie about what happened to Trixie, all the ponies involved in covering up what really happened agreed it was for the best, and even the CMC agreed it was better not to let anypony else know what happened, even if they weren't able to talk to the adults right now.

So Today, Apple Bloom was waiting at her home with her sister. Apple Core had revealed that she was coming by with her sister after Applejack had revealed that Apple Bloom had been regressed. She also said there was a surprise that she had for them. Apple Bloom pondered what Babs would do after she saw her as a foal. Would she laugh in her face? Did her cousin have a soft spot for foals, like many do? Would she avoid talking to Apple Bloom? All the questions kept going on in her head, she wasn't sure she wanted to be seen like this. She then crawled under the blanket her sister was covering herself with as she was read a book on some apple knowledge. Applejack's attention went towards her sister as she felt this movement. She lifted the covers to look at her sister and asked, "Whatcha donin down there sugar cube?"

Apple Bloom whimpered a bit and looked away from her sister. Applejack knew something was bothering her sister and so she picked her up, and pulled her out from under the covers. "Apple Bloom. What's wrong sweetie? Aren't you excited to see Babs?" Applejack asked.

Apple Bloom shook her head. "No? Why not?" Applejack inquired.

Apple Bloom, knowing she couldn't talk gestured to her foal body. Applejack then caught on to what she was saying. "Oh youngin. Babs is your cousin. She won't think less of you. And you Mama-Sissy is here if Babs gets out of line," Applejack assured her.

Soon there was a knock on the door. As this happened, Applejack placed Apple Bloom in her play pen and headed for the door and Apple Bloom soon hid under the covers in the play pen. After she did, she heard Applejack say, "Apple Core. It's been a long time cousin, and... is that who I think it is with you?"

Apple Bloom then heard Apple Core say, "Indeed. Babs had a little "accident" with one of the potions stores we were visiting, and well, this happened."

Apple Bloom was now curious. What happened to her cousin? She soon pulled off the covers and saw something she didn't expect. There, riding in a foal carrier on Apple Core's side was he cousin Babs Seed, Regressed to a foal like her. Now she saw why her cousin had stopped writing to her. "You haven't been havin any trouble at home with her have ya?" Applejack asked.

"Oh no, she may be a hoofful at times, but it's not anything I can't handle. I had been trying to convince her to let us make a visit to you and your friends, and when you sent a letter about Apple Bloom's situation, Babs finally agreed. So now here we are," Apple Core said.

"Ah see. Well, bring her over to the play pen. I'm sure she and Apple Bloom would like to catch up, even if they are foalified," Applejack said.

Apple Core soon set her little sister in the play pen and she and Applejack headed into the kitchen to talk and make lunch. Apple Bloom and Babs looked at each other for a moment surprised to see each other as they were. Then they crawled over and hugged each other. "Wow, I can'ts bewieve youw a foaw too," Apple Bloom said.

"Me too. It's wiewd but fun to be a foaw again. I didn't wanna be at fiwst, but I weawwy wike de a attention Mama and my Sissy awe giving me," Babs said.

"Yeah, Mama had been tweating me weawwy nice too. So has big bwodew," Apple Bloom said.

"Wait, did you just caww Appwejack Mama?" Babs asked.

"I can'ts caww hew anyting ewse. I guess it's cause she was wike my Mama when I was a foal befowe," Apple Bloom told her.

"Oh, dat makes sensth," Babs said.

"Uhuh, Sweetie Bewwe and Scoots awe Foaws too by da way," Apple Bloom told her.

"Weawy?" Babs asked shocked.

"Eeyup," Apple Bloom replied, trying to imitate her big brother.

"Wow. So we awws gets to be foaws again. I don't thik I want dis to stop," Babs said.

"You know I tink I'm wit you der. Mama did dis just to keep me outs of twoubwe tiww summew, but now I tink I not wants to change back," Apple Bloom agreed.

"But what if dey don't wet you stay wike dis?" Babs asked.

"Weww, I don't know yet. I mean I sometimes do wants to go back to being a fiwwy, so I weawy don't know if I wants dis ow not, but I feew mowe wike I wants it.... Hey, I gots a question. Have you been having any woss of memowy, wike, you feew wike der's someting you think you shoulds wemembew, but you can'ts?" Apple Bloom asked.

"I was abouts to ask yous da same ting. Like, do you feew wike ders something ewse we supposed to have besides Mama or sissy's miwk?" Babs asked.

"Dat's a good question, but I can't wemembew having anyting ewse," Apple Bloom said.

"Same hewe," Babs said.

After the talked about that, both felt their tummies rumble. "And speaking of Mama's miwk, I tink we need some now," Apple Bloom said.

"Weww, wets caww to dem in da best way we know," Babs said.

Both foals cracked a smile on their face. The house was soon filled by the two foals crying for their meal. Applejack and Apple Core came rushing in to calm them down and soon Applejack offered to nurse both foals since there was only room for one of them to feed the foals on the futon. Apple Core agreed and they decided they would take turns nursing the girls. Apple Bloom and Babs whimpered happily as Applejack covered them with the blanket to give them privacy. Unknown to them, Applejack and Apple Core had been talking about how they had grown more attached to their sibblings foalish side, and were unsure if this entire thing should end when summer came. The only thing that was making them think that they had to go through with it was Scootaloo and Sweeite Belle would be brought back to filly stage, so that meant bringing Apple Bloom and Babs back to filly stage as well when this was all over. Neither were aware about what was happening to Apple Bloom and Babs.

Author's Note:

Finished, wow that took a while.

Apple Bloom: Weww its abouts time. We was about to give tickwe attack.

Scoots: Yeah, so, why can't we wemebew being abwe to eat ow dwink anyting besides Mama's miwk.

Me: I don'ts know. I can't wemembew having anyting besides Mama's miwk eithew.

Sweetie Belle: Weww, at weast we gets to be welated to woyawty nows.

Scoots: Yeah, dat's so coow.

Apple Bloom: Yeah, and it's nice dat Twixie gets to stawts ovew.

Scoots: So do we gets to pick on snotty nobwes?

Sweetie Belle: Do we get to weaw cwowns?

Apple Bloom: Does dis mean we get to hang outs wit da Pwincesses mowe often?

Luna: Okay my nieces, give Nighty a break, this took a lot of energy out of him. *My tummy rumbles and I blush.* And I think that he needs to regain some of it right now. This chapter worked up an appetite for him. Come on sweetie. *Picks me up out of the lunar play pen and carries me over to the bed and covers me with her wing as I nurse.*

Cadence: Now, be sure to leave our son a positive comment and constructive criticism about this chapter, unless you wish to suffer a, ahem, punishment of sorts.

Luna: We're not kidding.

Comments ( 32 )

Nice chapter, Nighty. Good to know that Babs is going to join in the fun.

There need to be more Babs Seed AR fics. She's just damn awesome.

5798739 Hmmm, maybe in the future I'll give her her own private foal regression story.

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Oh, what did you think of my explanation to the kingdom about Princess Trixie.

Luna: Hey, don't pester him.

Me: Sowwy.:twilightblush:

Gasp! Could my eyes deceive me?... No... YES!!! NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!

*proceeds to read*

5798747 It's really nice, actually. Though the spell that was beyond her level of power seemed oddly similar to Sisters of Magic.

Whilst I'm not a fan of repetition, I did enjoy this explanation, Nighty.

5798761 Well, I didn't intend for it to be a repeat. There was some difference to it at least. I wasn't sure what else would be a good explanation. Saying that she was deceased seemed to be too dark, saying that they punished her by regressing and making her a blank slate was too dark as well. I was throwing ideas around in my head, and this looked like the best explanation for it. Do think there was something better I could have done, by chance. If so, let me know in private messages.

Night--Mist can your stories get any cuter i can't take much more if they find my body the C.O.D was a cuteness overdose

5798819 It wasn't me. Da eviw monkey did it.

J3P isn't scared of nothing bring it on

Ah, so Babs has been regressed as well? Well, at least now the CMC are together again.

An interesting if somewhat confusing continuation.

So...
Trixie is now Twilight's daughter, and niece to all alicorns, somehow (Equestrian legality is confusing).
Everyone knows it's adult Trixie who is now a foal, but also knows she wiped out her entire memory (rather dark, that).
Blueblood is Twilight's nephew too now, despite being older than her.
Babs is also a foal (completely out of left field there).
And something dangerous about being foalified is coming to light.

Did I catch everything?

I don't know, Trixie I can understand but the crusaders staying foals, I mean I like the idea, but then what about all their friends.

5798907 I think that pretty much sums it up so far.

This mean that the Ponyville CMC were not only friends with Trixie. They were also her cousins.

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You need to fix your southern dialect. You need to make it consistent. Either Ah, or I. You or Ya.

And I don't remember the foals talking before. Foals don't speak that well before 3. 6 Mo.s would be like the Cake Twins, few words, and nowhere near that Comprehensive. Still it's good to see an update.

5815606 Okay, so thank you for the update and suggestions. As for how the foals can talk, it's called foal language. The foals can understand each other, but the grown ups can not. It's kind of like Rugrats.

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Ah. That makes a bit of sense, and that was a great Nickelodeon cartoon.

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Makes me wonder why they had to run out of ideas.

saw babs's foalification coming a mile away, though the how it happened was a nice surprise.

5825042 :twilightblush:

Hope you have time to look at my latest blog and comment.

whens the next one?

Darn. I really wanted to read this, but I saw the red cancelled and now am sad. :applecry:

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Hay look its not canceled any more its on hiatus. (is that a good thing?)

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Yes. But don't expect something right off the bat.

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Im okay with that but just so you know im happier that sisters of magic isint canceled any more.

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Just so you are aware, I am offering commissions to be taken, either to update existing stories, or to make new stories. If you are interested, feel free to PM me.

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Um... sorry but pm how do i do that?

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PM is short for private message.

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You know just for the record im still waiting for a story where applejack rarity and rainbow are regressed and the cmc get to be big sisters.

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Did I put that out sometime in the past I was gonna do something like that? Cause if I did, I am sorry, cause, so much has happened in recent years with the Navy, I may have completely spaced that.

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Actually what i meant was if you look there isn't a story like that on fimfiction net you know what i mean?

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Now that I think back to it. There was someone on youtube who made an animation of the three older sisters (And yes, I am considering Rainbow and Scootaloo sisters for this.) switch roles with their three younger sisters. I believe Twilight was the one who had a hoof in the role reversals.

bravo, well done on the story, *says under breath* I Wike scootsy ugh stupid lisp

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