• Member Since 19th Oct, 2011
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Peppy Greyskull

Pony smut author known for his love of fillies, futa, and Nightmare Moon and his deep-seated hatred for all males.

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Grats on the 500 Followers, Peps!

This was fun to edit, and even better to read! Twilight x Nightmare Moon, almost as good as Twilight and Luna is!

Triple penetration...?

Well, if it works...

~Skeeter The Lurker

Aww yissss, I've been waiting for this one for a while!

Thanks a lot. Maybe there'll be something worth drawing in this fic ... :trollestia:

very very good and well written need more of this:raritystarry::raritystarry:

Comment posted by Nova007 deleted Jul 14th, 2013

Whoa, have Celestia killed Twilight? :pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2:

I don't think this particular topic (Twilight overpowering NMM and then doing very hot things to her) has been ever brought up.

I find your lack of faith disturbing.

This Is Relly Good MORE :flutterrage: Pls:fluttercry:

Uh.....wow, okay. This was good, though I would have liked to know what Celestia had apparently done to Luna, other than the banishment of course. It seemed implied at one point that something else had happened.

Twilight was.....well understandable I guess, and also kinda pitiable. Not wanting to harm anyone but not having the strength to resist the urge. Still, I think what they have now is okay, though frankly I don't blame Celestia at all for her reaction.

Honestly, I just hope this all works out without them having to run or such, because I don't believe Luna would have allowed Celestia to do that. Nor do I see Celestia doing anything to her sister while pregnant.

I saw that too and thought, "This must be read."

2876541 Well, this is an alt universe to one of my alt universes, so that's explained there. As far as what happens next, that'll be revealed tomorrow~

Yay, got something to look forward to.

I don't know why Luna would tell celestia of what twilight did....unless she has concocted some 10 month plan to destroy her lol which would suck cuz I love the story so far....:) can't wait to see what happens next

Futa is not for me... Thanks for the warning though :3

Luna being an ass to Celestia earns this a thumbs down

2876883 Too bad you don't have a story for me to find an inane reason to downvote it for :rainbowlaugh:

2876877 Quick question. Do you like Male/Female?

2876925 Well, I didn't downvote because, unlike some people, I am not an asshole... And I am heterosexual male, you ask because...?

2876931 Nah, I ain't worried about the downvote. My thing is, how can you like male/female clop and not like female/female clop with one of them being the male? Unless you just don't like lesbian clop, but even then it's not pure lesbian.

2876941 I dunno, it just seems a bit too weird... It's like she-males; it's too unusual to be attractive. I can see where you're coming from though. A girl with a penis is a guy (with biological exceptions of course) and therefore, futa is technically normal clop. But when I see futa being mentioned, I instantly assume Futa x Futa (therefore Male x Male) and I am not attracted to that. Apart from the futa in your story, I am not a fan of gore/dark themes and your story sounds like it is too dark for me to enjoy, sorry :twilightoops:

2876956 Ain't really dark. Outside of the initial rape, the only thing that happens is the violence at the end of the last chapter.

So I had a shitty day today, and I see FutaTwi out of no where and now I'm happy again, dood.

Thanks for that, dood.

2877110 I noticed that this isn't complete...is there more, dood?

2877112 A final chapter to come tomorrow.

2877158 I'm working on the next chapter of ATFN, but I've got ideas roiling in my head and it's probably gonna be postponed because of this. :fluttershysad:

You made another Twilight X Nightmare story?

Dang, I have'nt finished the first one...:twilightblush:

(We need more emotion iconss)

2877880 Hehe, first one isn't finished yet either. This is my 500 follower special :twilightsmile:

starmetal-clad hooves

Someone's a Fallout: Equestria reader I see. :ajsmug:

Warning: Contains futa, triple penetration, pregnancy and some dark themes.

That's not a warning, that's a god damn sales pitch! Take my money!

2877885 Holy crap, I swear I made that comment two seconds ago.
Fastest. Reply. Ever.

... You magic?:trixieshiftright:

2877888 I like it, but that's not where the idea comes from.

2877895 Warning: Contains copious amounts of your fetish. Heart failure due to overload is a possible side-effect of reading. Use caution when browsing.

2877905 Hehe, a bit. I was mostly just focusing on the page at that point in time. :raritywink:

this hit the feature box....................:pinkiesick: me gusta:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

aww, no happy end? Lumi sad :fluttercry:

2878628 it does say it is incomplete :rainbowkiss:

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Celestia. got. PISSED!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Oh, and congrats on the 500 Followers, Peppy!:raritywink: :twilightsmile::raritywink: :twilightsmile::raritywink: :twilightsmile:

I love the direction this went. I totally expected Twilight to get the D, not this.

meet the majestic purple of the you unicorn's


Twilight felt queen tense under her touch

"the queen"?

Why does she continue to there and stare!?

I think you accidentally a word.

Twilight could not have been any more aroused.

And neither could I. :rainbowwild:

her breath having been stolen by the clitoral attack.

It's super effective!

inviting it in again her will.


pushing against the mare's cervix.

Twilight has a large penis for a mare, and even a stallion. Pretty sure alicorn internal anatomy scales with their external size.

Will you have my foals? I want you to foal my children!

If I was Nightmare, I would foal Twilight's children, though I am a little biased.

The fiery warmth of the seed spread through the hybrid pony’s depths as she was filled to the brim and more until, with each spasmodic thrust of lavender hips, her seed began to pool on the floor.

It is kinda difficult to tell what subject you are talking about here. They are both hybrids, but it sounds as if Nightmare is getting filled, yet the sentence ends as if referring to Twilight.

So, this first chapter was pretty hot. Awesomely fucked up as well, I loved it. Though as you can tell above I did find some spelling mistakes and have some comments about certain lines. I usually separate them into too blocks, but that would have taken time away from reading, so here they are, all scrambled together.


This is nice to hear. I almost had a shit-fit when I finished chapter three.

*wakes up*
*is out of tea*
*no friends on SL*
*loads up FiMFic.net*
*sees this*
Today's gonna be a good day. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

To board the Rape Train, one must leap upon it from the roof of the Snuggle Struggle Express. :twilightsmile:

Twilight could not have been any more aroused.

Yeah... Landed that jump like a BOSS. :twilightblush:

You do know it's spelled cum right? anyways great story.

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