Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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It is your story so canon isn't really necessary. It does give the mane six a topic to talk about when they are with Dominic.
In the end it is all up to you.
And a Christmas Special wouldn't really work considering he's on full alert mode. I don't think that he wants to see alot of ponies right now. Unless you skip a few months.
i dont blame him, thats a seriously dangerous level of psychology she just attempted. well at least no one died so thats a good start
Luna x Dom I think yes
damn, just.... Damn.
Twilight telling them what he doesn't want them to know is only gonna piss him off even more and it'll give him absolutely no reason to trust them.
Luna... what a bro.
Luna facepalming was the exact reaction I had.
No, stick to what you've got.
I can only think of a few possible scenarios where that would work, so I would say no.
I was just thinking of this story today. Then I get home and awesome update.
If you have a predetermined plot that you have already set out for your story then I really can't see it as necessary to follow season 4 events.
In the end it's your decision. I'll continue to read either way.
celestia has fucked up multiple times but I must say celestia,...........
I couldn't find a vid that sounded dead serious but she reeeeeaaaallllyyy fucked it up
P.S. good x chapter
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Also I am ever so glad that he just doesn't give two shits about what Celestia has to say, she doesn't deserve that in the slightest. I also agree with 3516667, these ponies are just digging themselves deeper and deeper and eventually they wont be able to get out.
Edit:
Only way I can see a Christmas special working is if its just Luna, Cadence (If she's around that time of year), Twilight (If he doesn't lose his shit after finding out she told her friends), and Dominic. Something quite simple really, no other ponies. Maybe alil gift exchange and good meal. Thats all i can really come up with.
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That's what I had in mind, mainly a dialog chapter where Luna uses the spell that brough Dominic to the Equestria to get him a gift from earth. Nothing big, maybe a picture or something small, but something meaningful. I'll think about it more, I may end up doing it for my creative writing class if that's the case.
I wasn't too far off in my prediction in the previous chapter, just got the wrong pony name,
Still, that was pretty fucked up. Celestia wanted to send Dom away for reacting to a scenario she created in the first place. Shining Armor can probably appreciate not having her visit a M.A.S.H tent.
"Oh look there are soldiers screaming and having wide awake nightmares, maybe aggravating their problems will show them that I care for them."
This chapter was pretty good, kinda wanted to see more interaction between Shining or any of the royal guard and Dom because of the whole PTSD problems.
I believe that you can do whatever you want, you are the author, this is your story, and anyone who gets upset for cannon, or lack of it... well, it's not their story, is it? Though if you want to, you might have a short chapter for hearths warming. Where Dom is alone and Luna brings him a gift or something. But make it real short and for the feels, you know some good character/relationship building(depending on where you're going with the story).
P.S. are you going to be looking to add OC's at any time? Maybe give Dom some friends that aren't mane 6 or royalty. If so could you perhaps use mine? let me know if so.
(If so, awesome. If not, still gonna enjoy reading this.
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Here ya go!
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thnx
*sigh* it depends on how bad the season is. Truthfully i believe that the show is now just a product of the fandom. I may be wrong, but if they have a somewhat good plot line that you can twist to make better sure. I'm not a fan favorite of twilicorn but if you can twist it right i'm game.
So far i'm loving this story, (celestia's a bitch lol! )
Well yeah like others said, it's your story. Personally, though, I think it will cause too much of a mess to try to add season 4 into this story. Tough enough adding season 3, what with Twily's wings 'n royal title 'n all.
Overall, despite all the well driven drama, it didn't seem like Celestia would have been a good choice to have poisoned him. Maybe Rainbow Dash being thoughtless, or Pinkie Pie being obnoxious or Blueblood being vindictive.... but Celestia...
It just seems like she would definitely know better than to do something like that.
Again, in the end it's your story. Either way it's still a good chapter.
Twilight is being dumb once again. If I had experienced something traumatic then I wouldn't want it to be public or even known. (unless it is said by my own mouth.)
Hey! I heard something personal from a new 'friend' of mine. Lets blabber it out to all of my other friends considering that is the best thing to do!
I really really want him to overreact to Twilights recent betrayal (Telling her friends his story behind his back)
On cannon,meh. The cristmess special i like, a fellow has a good idea for it below. Go for a the feels.
death to all hale Luna
Is this story dead because I really wanna see what happens next
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Its alive, but every idea I try seems to loop around back to the same point. If you have any suggestions, PM them to me.
No, he's fine.
Damn Im a Fucking Asshat.
I hate to say this, but I feel like it should be said.
Celestia, you fucking idiot. Do you honestly believe that anyone who live a life like that can easily tell it? No. No they can't. There are some things that can't just spill out sunbutt. I mean really Celestia your a bad pony.
Again sorry if anyone is insulted by this but I really feel like it should be said.
NOW YOU FUCKED UP: http://youtu.be/YepKOR5kbE4
And there goes twilight spilling all the beans even when celestia told her not to. Good job twilight, can't even hold out for a day.
So now for the great things!
Luna x Dominic I hope it's a thing
Christmas special you say? Are you reading my mind :D
Way to go Luna! She be telling it like it is
Bad Bad Cakebeard!
Celestia is a BITCH!
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*drinks a shot*
5739162 Agreed
5750842 Yes. And I'm both agreeing with you and Eclipsed, AND agreeing with little Nyx.
5739162 I wouldn't call her a bitch, but incredibly misguided and a bit stupid. Dominic said it flat out "The road to hell is paved with good intentions." While she thought she was helping, she didn't think it through entirely.
On the other hand, his anger is justified right now, and only time will tell if they make amends. Course this is also a response to a comment from nearly a year ago sooo... you probably already know what the out come may be :P
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i guess we could call her a control freak or an idiotic asshat if you prefer!
i hate celestia right now!
damn you poison joke!!!!!
Drip. Drip. Drip.
Her first response to "he's not behaving the way I want him to" is "therefore I should drug him"?
The first step to righting that wrong is stepping down from the throne, because clearly she's not fit to rule. Then she should go back to magic kindergarten for remedial ethics lessons. She can start completely from scratch, because apparently in her 1000+ years, she has not picked up the slightest bit of sense or common decency.
Wow, fucking Cadence...way to tell Celestia off. Damn, girl, you got stones!
The written style of The King's Merry Olde English is different that what you have. Thy in place of thou and so forth. If you want to get a feel for it for other stories, read some of William Shakespeare's plays or the King James Bible.
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singsI'm relying on your common decency/So far it has to surface but I'm sure it exists./It just takes a while to travel from your head to your fist.
I love the fact that the poison joke acted like the killing joke from the FoE fan fic.
I ship it
Pardon me askin', but how da fuq does she know that?
And secondly, no. Well, maybe, with a grain of salt. If true, this would've been one of the more subtle actions, if not the most subtle action, either state would've taken.
I'm sorry, but both were hell to those that knew them. Celestia showed very poor judgement, likely stemming from her overall lack of experience with such creatures, or circumstances. If Nazi Germany or the Soviets were to do this, they would've done so with perfect understanding of the consequences and ramifications.
So in the end, I don't think that comparison is fair. It has some truth to it, but is exceedingly harsh to say the least - the outcome became this, but the motivations couldn't be more different.
Ahh, its always fun reading 'muricans compare union to nazi Germany.
It's not like CIA would ever drug someone to pull info. Naah they are the good guys.
Someone watched Red Dawn too many times. I wonder if it was MC or the author.
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I am fully aware that the CIA or the US in general is not some perfect wonderland. What I was attempting to convey was that the MC has idealized the US in his mind because it's one of the few things he has left of a time when the world made sense, therefore any country that opposed the US in the past is viewed in the opposite light. Through that idealized lens he was able to cling to his sanity.
I'll concede that the metaphor was fairly heavy handed, it wasn't intentional on my part. Re-reading this story years later has revealed some glaring instances of that, it's something that I've attempted to improve on in future projects. This was my first committed attempt at a story, and once again I'll grant that my amateurism certainly shows. At the moment I'm not currently planning on amending any further portions of this story or its series, but I'll make a note of this mishandled metaphor should that change. Thank you for your input.
Cordially, TB
Comparing the Nazis with the Soviets , like the fox with the hunter or the bacteria and the doctor. Bullshit
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Not really, they worked off many of the same doctrines. Since the creator of fascism was also a socialist and just created his own branch off it after the socialist party of Italy threw him out. So communism and fascism are both branches off the same root.
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I mean, Stalin era Russia was still a terrible place to live, just for different reasons.